Reviews for The Earth on Fire
unknown chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
I love your writing, and you're a wonderful writer...

But I'm sorry, I REALLY can't stand Bella, and I can't stand how much a push-over Cassie's being about Bella coming to visit. Time doesn't change the fact that Bella attacked her daughter. Sorry, it doesn't, not to me, anyways. You're a great author, and I encourage you whole-heartedy to continue but just...argh, I can't stand Bella.

The funniest thing is, you've written her completely in character. You've followed Bella's personality (to me) the best out of any other author I've read. And I'd read this 1000% guarantee, if Bella wasn't in it.

Not your style of writing, just the characters/circumstance. One of those uncontrollable things, you know? Sorry, again. I'll probably come back to this story after I've taken a break, and I'll review about how much I love it. I'm bipolar that way.
kaykayM chapter 36 . 1/5/2011
ahhh! this wa g! i'm sososooo excited about the sequel.. GAH! i can't wait!

you're a brilliant writer :D xxx

(..woah, that's a lot of !'s. but you're worth it ;D)
daoxuan chapter 3 . 5/16/2010
im guessing bella was in echo's room. am i right or am i right? :]
1962 chapter 34 . 3/27/2010
I loved this and Where Witches Ride. My daughter show me them. And I love your stories. Your writing is great. I'm just about to start War of the Roses. I can't wait to see how things end up your own charters are wonderful. Thank you for a great trilogy. I'm going to start WotR now.
MintCcIceCream chapter 36 . 2/21/2010
Ahh! This story was so crazy! In a good way though. Definitely a good way! I loved it, and I can't wait to read all about Echo, Blaze, Eva, and Delilah in the next story! I was a little confused on what exactly happened at the end. I'm pretty sure Jezebel died, but I'm not too certain on everything else. But anyway, good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY!


hw- the blue dog chapter 1 . 10/13/2009

I know this is a Twilight fanfic, but have you read Maximum Ride? I read your summary and in one of the books it says almost exactly the same thing.

The Blue Dog
MysticNyx06 chapter 34 . 8/3/2009
so i absolutly love it and am on to the next one! yay!
MysticNyx06 chapter 28 . 8/3/2009
ok. so even though it's super sad I can't help but love the angsty goodness... i read the summary for the 3rd part of this story and the "jake and cassie's story is over" part is worrying me... :(
MysticNyx06 chapter 22 . 8/3/2009
I love it. It's funny bc the way I picture Pandora is like one of the evil shadows from the video game Kingdom Hearts... where she's wrapped in dark shadow, beautiful but scary... and the way I picture Belle is kind of like an old hippie in 15 layers of clothes and flowers in her hair... I love the contrast.
MysticNyx06 chapter 14 . 8/3/2009
aw! ok so I can't get enough of this story. I should be doing my job right now but instead can't stop reading... :D
MysticNyx06 chapter 8 . 7/31/2009
so I've never cried reading a FF but the beginning of this chapter had my eyes all puffy and red... :( But I love the angst! yay!
MysticNyx06 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
so yeah... I'm probably going to read all 3 stories before this weekend even hits... you got me addicted... :)
Lyrannae chapter 34 . 2/26/2009
Wow. This has quite honestly been the best fanfic I have ever read. It feels so real, you know? Like, when I was reading it, it felt like an actual book. The whole future-past thing got a bit confusing sometimes, but now at the end it all makes complete sense

Now I need to go read the sequel...
JessJavensen chapter 35 . 10/26/2008
... Are you TRYING to torture me?

Another beautiful, and haunting chapter. Showcasing one of my favorite characters to boot. I'll try and contain myself, so I'll just leave off here.

Christian freakin' rules!

As does your stories _

Peace and Love,

ms.readsalot1211 chapter 9 . 10/17/2008

Jezebel is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters. She is so interesting.

Thanks for writing!

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