Reviews for Everybody into the pool
corik80 chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
That was absolutely hilarious! I have loved this story very much! You could continue it and I wouldn't be too upset! Great job!
jasadin chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
LOL. I adore these. EVery chapter is so funny
nonhalema chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Sweet...loved it...very good idea
goldpiece chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Okay, maybe this is a really stupid review, I'm not sure but how far along was she supposed to be in this chapter, because by the time you can find out the gender you're at least eighteen weeks along. She would have been showing long before that. Other than that, this is a really cute story. I can't wait to see how many other chapters you can come up with for this thing.

Emmmmmmaaaa chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
this is one of my favourite stories from you! This is so cute and funny :]
Chicklit chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
I give you double extra credit for the comment about using Vedic hymns for names. Genius!
Aching Bones chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Hi there,

Could just so see her too...

'She disappeared into the elevator, no one daring to enter it with her'...

Love how everyone was watching...

*'He was sitting at his desk, working hard at some stack of paper, but he must have felt her coming, because he, too, looked up, just in time for her to burst through his door'...

*'He’d been advancing toward her, a worried look on his face, clearly meaning to pull her into one of those hugs that makes the rest of us feel like we have no understanding of what an embrace is'...

*'He knew was in deep. He was using every endearment in the playbook'...

Love when she said it was twins...

'I heard Jack murmur “Crap. I never put that in the betting pool'...

Oh I just loved when Cullen said...

'Remind me to wiretap his office,” Cullen grumbled again. “We’re missing all the mushy good parts'...

I have a funny feeling that Bones and Booth were deliberately whispering to each other, probably inciting each other to continue with their little charade...something like 'We have them' and 'Come on lets spice it up a little'...Oh I just love these two...

Love how they had deliberately set it up for Charlie to win and how Booth did not want to know the sexes of the babies...The names should be very interesting...

The only thing that I was not completely sure of was from just who's pov was it...I thought Sweets...was I right?

This was great and looking forward to more...

celtic33 chapter 3 . 11/2/2008 after that pool, howabout where are they going to live? buy a house? in/out of the city? etc... :)
dknckelly chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
YAY! I love this. I hope we don't have to wait 5 months for the next chapter.
millerdobey chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Just found these and I'm loving every word. Too funny! Can't wait for more!
BlueTigress chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Great chapter! :D

Love it how everybody was watching the "show"! lol

Can't wait for more!

Babynames are always a good pool! :D
doresz chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Cool! Thank God for story alerts, I needed this now. Nice one. I love your writing! Anything you write, I'm on it reading as soon as I get the alerts! And I love how you bring Cullen and Caroline and all the others into your stories (Serendipity?), too bad the show doesn't use them more frequently.

Thank you! :)
angel1002 chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
All three chapters were great. The fights between Booth and Brennan were absolutley hilarious. I was laughing outloud. I loved that they were fixing the pool so the people who needed it could win the money. Great job. I can't for more.
next chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
This made me laugh so, so much...I almost cried.

I loved it... )
kkcoolkat8 chapter 2 . 10/4/2008
hahahahaha i loved that story so much!
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