Reviews for The Wise One: Book Two: Awakening |
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peggy77 chapter 26 . 2/8/2023 I am so sorry to hear what happened to you and your family. ;-( |
peggy77 chapter 24 . 2/8/2023 I read the lyrics, they really are very fitting for Neville. You know, in canon I felt sorry for him for a very long time but in this story, I feel even sorrier for him. You say Dumbledore loves him but boy he sure totally ruined his life. Yeah, you fooled me. :-). I thought he was going to tell them that he is Harry but instead he finally stood up to the toad. |
tgraham00 chapter 21 . 2/3/2023 I don’t understand why Harry apologized to Ginny; he did nothing wrong. She simply couldn’t wrap her head around, “He’s just not that into you,” and made everything a bigger deal than it was. But that was on her, not him. He isn’t responsible for her emotions; she is. |
WeisseHex chapter 27 . 9/9/2022 Awesome! |
Osmodious chapter 27 . 2/9/2022 A great continuation of a really good story…a bit more angst than part 1, but perhaps not too much (I was afraid you’d fall into that way overused trope of Harry refusing to become involved with Hermione to protect her, though you did use that with Sirius and Catalina…who I hope reunite in part 3). Anyway, you are a very good writer and this part just reinforced that…now I have to go read part 3. Thanks for posting! |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 20 . 1/21/2022 This is really well written, I'm just not a fan of pairings, so I'm leaving a review as a show of support while I look for something more to my admittedly narrow taste |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 14 . 1/20/2022 Harry's doubt is getting annoying. I get that he's a teenager and he's got a war on his head and Voldemort IN his head and... oh, your just touched the subject. Okay, I wasn't complaining. |
Krummbein8 chapter 27 . 9/23/2021 I've read the first part of this series and the second is very nice as well! I loved the idea of Sirius getting out of Azkaban and protecting Harry, and the second part is amazing as well. Now, I'm going to read the third :D thanks for sharing! |
kimjo2 chapter 27 . 7/8/2021 Again, a truly amazing story. Thanks so much |
Oanh chapter 17 . 6/29/2021 I love this fiction, one of the best HP's. It doesn't have too many talking like other fic and have a good logical bonding between Harry and sirius |
Guest chapter 21 . 12/15/2020 This is why adhering to canon despite the story's plot is such an incredibly bad idea. There is no way THIS Harry would ever, in a million years, put up with some bitch using a blood quill on him. Nope. HUGE plot fail. |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/15/2020 So is this "book" just going to mimic canon? That's boring. |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/15/2020 I hate it when erstwhile intelligent characters in stories are suddenly so artificially stupid that they can't come inside when it rains. |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/12/2020 So SuperHarry with all the training and the devoted father figure WHO HE SEES DAILY doesn't manage to tell ANYONE about Umbitch and her tortures... ...so, how do you spell HUGE PLOT FAIL? |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/12/2020 I had high hopes for this set of stories but now it seems like they're just following the bullshit in the canon version. |