|Reviews for Closer|
| inklover93 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I love this soooo much. I absolutely loved the books but I wanted to read something in his point of view and I couldn't have asked for a better story to fill that need!
| Tinted Basket chapter 10 . 7/10/2011
Now that was an interesting new take on things. Despite Meliara getting captured somewhere in there, everything went over quite well. It amused me to see Mel get the better of Vidanric a few times. Not to mention the amount of gossip in the court just spiked significantly. XD
Flavric was certainly a bit more out of his element. I liked this ending. Though I adore the real ending to the book, this one works as well. Seeing things from Vidanric's point of view is always interesting. Particularly because the book(s) are written entirely from Meliara's point of view. You did a good job of organizing the events here and making them believeable. Also that bit with Savona was hilarious. Vidranric really can't hide anything from him. lol
Nice story you've got here. It was a fun read. Nice job.
| Anenihan chapter 10 . 12/23/2009
| siromygod chapter 10 . 12/15/2009
Aw, too cute. I cant believe its over. Its sad, but at the same time, its like, whoo! Done! Hahaha, hows it feel to finish?
| courtingu chapter 9 . 8/13/2009
its good! so happy you updated! cant wait to findout wat happens with flauvic. please update soon :)
| siromygod chapter 9 . 8/10/2009
Danric's slightly hysterical moments are kinda awesome. )
| fictionlover26 chapter 8 . 2/27/2009
Wonderful story! You brought a new twist to the characters and I love it. Please keep writing and updating often.
| BonGarland chapter 8 . 2/20/2009
so i just read these books...and i have to say, you're doing a marvellous job. Thanks for writing!
| siromygod chapter 8 . 2/15/2009
"I leaned into her and forgot about the heads exploding around us."
I love it.
Keep up the good work. D
| courtingu chapter 7 . 12/17/2008
I so happy you updataed! Its so cute Mel and Danric! PLZ updata soon and fast cant wait to find out what happens next!
| Wisteria-Blossoms chapter 7 . 12/17/2008
Aw! That was cute. I love how she totally forgot about being mad at him when she saw he was exhausted. That's love right there. Ha ha Seriously though you are so good at writing fluffy scenes I'm jealous.
| siromygod chapter 7 . 12/17/2008
Love it! Look forward to more. D
| Pepsi Keith chapter 6 . 10/20/2008
This last ch. was by far my fav. not only did the story move forward but we also got a little mel danric action. please update soon!
| Wisteria-Blossoms chapter 6 . 10/4/2008
I love this story it's so romantic !
oh and sorry I didn't review sooner I've been too lazy to get on the computer.
“Don’t wake them.”
“I don’t want to wake them, but your constant shushing might do the trick.”
ha ha so funny
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/24/2008
A very lovely, fluffy story (I like fluff, btw) : )
Update soon please!