|Reviews for Shadow Blade|
| MomochiNaruto chapter 4 . 11/20/2008
Interesting you did a nice job of tying Raynor's son into it. I like the format and the chapter seem to be just long enough.
| Quirel chapter 4 . 9/27/2008
So... Cyber-lords were supposed to command Spectres? That would be a bit awkward, depending on the operational radius.
And so, I get a clarification on how long Warfield has been around. Seems like he has a radically different role than General Duke had, though.
Johny Raynor? StarCraft does have a bit of a problem with family ties, no? Wonder if Duke has any offspring wandering about...
| Quirel chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
Ashcroft... that name keeps sounding familiar.
As for the cyber-Overlord... .
I remember seeing the concept art for that. Went over like a lead balloon. (Or a female Protoss with breasts)
Still, I kind of like this narrative. Not sure why, but it's a fair departure from the normal 'run and gun' I've been reading lately.
| Quirel chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
Been a while since I last read this...
So, I presume that the references to Thompson are from a Blizzard Map of the Month? Like "Operation Claws?"
And yeah, I'd say you made the right decision about excluding Valerian Mengsk, despite what an interesting character he is. (swordplay notwithstanding)
| Northmen chapter 3 . 8/10/2008
Very interesting. The ending was quite good though I did see a few spelling errors.
| Northmen chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
Very interesting. I hope you continue to update!
| Quirel chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
A story about the Spectre program. Should be interesting. I'm assuming that these reports are supposed to be some sort of diary or something?
Only noticed a few errors, like a split chapter, but I'm starting to think there's a few bugs in the document uploader.