|Reviews for Kingdom Come|
| CurrentlyIncognito chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
:3 waiting period. lol.
| Belphegor chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Forget Heaven and Hell, if God exists he must have at least a form of sense of humour (maybe a fondness for the absurd) and if he doesn't exists, well, this is of no concern for him :) Brilliant little touches of laughter here and there, and all in all a nifty little story and a very nice read! Thanks :)
| brindlegreyhound chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I found myself deeply amused.
Well done dialog, and good concept.
| Andie14 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Frankly the way I see it, God gave me my sense of humour so he can't be surprised that I had tears of laughter rolling down my cheeks when I read this.
In fact I read it out loud (with voice characterisations) to my husband it was that funny.
Such a brilliant take on the whole story.
And if it's wrong to find this funny then I guess I'll see you in hell!
| hcate7 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I loved it! Death is my favorite er... character I guess, ever! And I love story of JC with a little more... fun. The original one seems a bit... dry. Or something.
| Charli800 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
I will start off by admitting that I'm biased: that was digustingy irreverent and I'm sorry you've never thought about it seriously. I am not so biased however, that I won't review your writing, so here it is:
Technically, excellent. I won't discuss 'biblical canon' issues, because I assume you don't care. (There are a lot of garing inaccuracies other than your 'recharactarisations', but nevermind, that's just me) I think your Death was a little too friendly, but not excessively so. The toss-off reference to Azrael also seemed somewhat overdone to me, but again it's a minor point and an opinion anyway.
You're a great writer, although I have to wonder what someone so obviously intelligent can believe about the meaning of life without religion. (Sorry, had to say that. These things are important to me . . .)
| NorthernTrash-x chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Fantastic concept. Really original, I was impressed. Well written, and enjoyable.
| M chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
That was dead good! I was in stitches after that lol
| Annoyingly Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Your fic made me smile. Jesus weaseling his way out of death... Well, he really DID do it, after all. Giving Jesus a more human touch was a very nice touch as well. Death was in-character, and the idea of God betting on his son is hilarious. Overall a good fic. Not many authors are willing to take on Jesus and his death like this (the chickens...)
| Estelle Tiniwiel chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
This was brilliant. Just the right amount of humour for this version of the Bible story to work. I never thought anyone would be able to pull this off, but you did it. Fantastic piece of work.
Estelle Tiniwiel -x-
P.S I'm sure you won't be sent to Hell for this. God must have a sense of humour :-) And if he doesn't, then an eternity in Heaven could get a bit boring anyway. Great writing.
| Moi dix Mois chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I love you
| God of Laundry Baskets chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
I don't know why this hasn't been adressed before, but I fully support this fic. XD It is just such a good point, Death comes for us all and he let Jesus off the hook for a little bit. Amusment has been achived.
| AimeryKrey chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
| suz chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Loved it. A different take on the resurrection which I really hope actually happened. It would be nice to know that Jesus/God et al had a sense of humour. Cheers for this!
| Gogol chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Would you like to elope with me and let me have your babies? We could move to France, where I would feed you chocolate and small cheeses wrapped in red plastic for no apparent reason.
Seriously. You're going to Hell anyway, you might as well enjoy the rest of your time here. And you deserve it! Because this. Is. Awesome.