Reviews for Bon Appetit
SweetXscape chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
hehe, this was funny for some odd reason. Lol, more please! :) great job
crvenashkorpija chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I would killed that waiter long ago...:-)
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Great story! Very funny! I really enjoyed it! (I've been trying to write this for almost 24 hours! The review page wouldn't open.)
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I just re-watch the awesome movie. Great one-shot. :)
loha chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
saffie3 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Very very good, I loved the story
FireStallion chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Very funny! I just watched this movie for the first time and found things like this just hilarious. Very well done.
DeadLikeI chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
lol not bad of a story i so like Life’s a bitch, then you die line. do you do any good dead like me storys
thetodobientuvieja chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Log in is for loosers 8]

As for your fic, it's marvelous! There's no morality box, but I'm guessing the restaurant was very fine.


"o.o But it makes the rat suffer...!"
moonbeam1987 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
this was good i liked the arguement about the chicken classic
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Pretty humorous. Spartan's comments were spot on with all that stupid organix soy food crap.
Ion Unlimited chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
funny short story...but you forgot to include the Verbal Morality Moniters that would've no doubt been installed in the restaurant. When John exclaimed about his "fucking dinner", it would've been more authentic to include something like, "Lenina winced at the loud buzzer of the moniter across the restaurant" followed by, "It's a wonder how he manages to retain any of the S.A.P.D.'s paycredits with his language". all in all, very
theinspired chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
That was funny!
nothingistrivial86 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Well, you certainly stand out as the only author of a fan fic for Demolition Man. I have to say I enjoyed the story. Very good, I felt as if I were listening to Sylvester Stallone.

The emphasis on certain words just brings to mind all of his mannerisms.

demolition18 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
This was funny. I saw the movies lots of times. Did you read my fan fiction? I wrote in ideas for a novel.