Reviews for Roses and Thorns
68 stones from a broken heart chapter 17 . 8/22/2008
I really liked what you did with the ffic. Every marriage will have its trials, and unfortunately no child will go unscathed from witnessing them, i liked the way you went about the issue, and how you chose to include Harley's POV.
extremeshan81 chapter 17 . 8/20/2008
WOW! You've covered so many sensitive issues here, I don't know where to begin! I agree that all marriages have their ups and downs - believe me I know that much!

I think you handled ALL the issues in this fic with sensitivity and they were written in such a brilliant way that I felt like I was living through the story with the characters.

This was a brilliantly written piece and you have nothing to worry about with your writing, it shows maturity and understanding on par with some of the best writers on this site!

And thank you for your mention of the Forces - my dad served for 30 years, I did 7 and my husband and brother are both still serving and are currently in sunnier climes...it means a LOT to get a shout out like that...so THANK YOU.

I can't wait to read your follow up to this, well done.

H

xx
extremeshan81 chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
Ha ha 'That was awesome, did you hurt the floor'..too funny x
Chibiwok chapter 17 . 8/17/2008
OH my this is so cute! I mean ell Jff sining must be amazing!
iNdy MiLk chapter 17 . 8/17/2008
oh thank god Kody and Jeff ended up together!

I can't wait till the threequal,

I Have one question though,

Is Jeff the father of the baby? or is it the rapist?

thanx for the info on fudgepops! i wonder if there is anything in ireland that AMericans want but they don't have?

XoXDaisy Doodle BugXoX
Chibiwok chapter 16 . 8/16/2008
UGh they better get back togther now!
iNdy MiLk chapter 15 . 8/15/2008
hahahaha i loved her talking to the fudgepops!

are fudgepops nice?

we don't have them in ireland [

I love Kody and Harley so much they are brilliant characters,

please, please let jeff come back...

XoXDaisy Doodle BugXoX
Chibiwok chapter 15 . 8/14/2008
Hahaha Oh boy. I love it.. makes me happy inside...
Chibiwok chapter 14 . 8/14/2008
Ok let me think about this for a second...no lie..ok if Jeff was in love with me and Shannon wasd too...damn..I would..do so many naughty things. Oh Shannon what will you think of next.
Chibiwok chapter 13 . 8/14/2008
Oh My God. Harley is so fucking cute I can'T STAND IT. aLSO I WANT SHANNON!
iNdy MiLk chapter 13 . 8/14/2008
Awh that chapter was so cute,

isn't Harley just the cutest thing ever ]

I loved it, great writing

PLEASE let Jeff come back soon!

I can't wait till the next chapter

XoXDaisy Doodle BugXoX
iNdy MiLk chapter 12 . 8/13/2008
Awh stories never make me cry EVER ut this one is...

please, Ill get on my knees and beg for it, please let Jeff and Kody work it out and be together in the end!

Awh i can't stop crying,

oh and that baby better be Jeffs

XoXDaisy Doodle BugXoX
Chibiwok chapter 12 . 8/12/2008
Aww my jaw just hit the floor by the way...wow...
Chibiwok chapter 11 . 8/12/2008
Wow this is so like I wanna cry. I am so glad that Shannon isn't like KODY! I am so glad she is going to talk to him and b with him.
Chibiwok chapter 9 . 8/11/2008
He better be ok.. I will cry...cry nice warm tears..Shannon is my man!
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