Wow, that was a brave author's choice. Probably tough to get thru too.

That went better than expected.

Not sure why Jake came instead of Charlie.

Damn. Kinda saw that coming. WHO would ride a bike in those conditions? Bella!

There goes Edward losing his head again...

Sweet! (In the cool sort of way)

Go Edward Go!

I realize this story is from a lifetime ago, but reading it for the first time, I cannot get over how insensitive the Cullens are acting towards Edward’s plight in Innuendo. He is being repeatedly psychologically raped and assaulted & physically molested & the family just LAUGHS! Even going so far as to continuously add fuel to the fire with their ribbing. Esme (who supposedly is so protective of her children) does nothing, but maintain that he behaves, & offers her a tour of the boy, like he’s not being flayed alive in front and of them. It’s APPALLING! They would NEVER tolerate, let alone condone, such behavior if their sexes had been reversed. She should never have been permitted to stay, let alone treated as a “guest.” Yes, I will admit that Edward is an ignorant fool, but that does not mean he deserves to be tortured and touched. And that the author has the gaul to say that Tanya will be redeemed in the future is not just salt on the wound. It’s eviscerating it with a rusted crowbar, to insure infection and the slowest and most painful of deaths.

I know that was a rant in the truest of forms, I was just so shocked by the family’s behavior and reaction, especially Jasper joining in on the joke, when he KNEW how both Edward and Tanya were feeling. But, I digress. I am, nonetheless enjoying the story & this take on everything, and especially the quality of the writing, but I pray to God that their behavior makes a 180, and fast! Because that one scene was disgusting.

You really grew as a writer through this story both in your style and your emotions. you brought us through an emotional arc that not only had pain, but great love
Bravo
Reb

Loved it

A friend sent me this fanfic back in 2009 (I think?) and I devoured it… kept checking back for updates, but lost track around chapter 10. Recently came back to see you had finished the story, and I just read it from start to finish. This story is amazing. The way you’ve written it is so beautiful, heartbreaking, believable. The way you developed the characters - explored their flaws, let them hurt from the consequences of their actions, and then eventually they learned and matured … there were so many stunning interactions and revelations. It was so gratifying to see Bella all grown up, and Edward taking steps toward maturing as well. Thank you for pouring your heart into this, it was an absolutely incredible delight to read.
-Stephanie R

Freaking Tanya! She’s going to ruin it!

i love it

I liked the story until you made Tanya take advantage of Edward by sexually assaulting him. I think that’s wrong. Please be mindful of your readers.

Your writing is absolutely beautiful, a pleasure to read. However... why did you make both Bella and Edward so unlikeable. They are two immature, self-centered attention seekers. Bella is a particular disappointment. I'm not sure if that was your intention.