Reviews for Seducing Ms Swan
karen4honor chapter 20 . 6/25/2015
THANK YOU for Bella's letter! I agree, it addressed several issues that stuck out in the originals. Btw, I know this is coming late in the day, so to speak, but CONGRATS on getting accepted!
karen4honor chapter 19 . 6/25/2015
This was a beautiful chapter and thank you so much for sharing your work!
karen4honor chapter 18 . 6/25/2015
Ohhh, my heart aches for them all
karen4honor chapter 15 . 6/25/2015
You did AWESOME! Jake and the rest needed this, too! :-)
karen4honor chapter 13 . 6/24/2015
Hooo-BOY! The fun is gonna REALLY start now...
karen4honor chapter 12 . 6/24/2015
WHOOSH! -O lemme check... yup! Still breathing here on my end!
karen4honor chapter 11 . 6/24/2015
VERY WELL DONE! BRAVA! They both needed this..
karen4honor chapter 9 . 6/24/2015
Aww hell...
karen4honor chapter 7 . 6/24/2015
BWAHAHAHAHA! Snickering all OVER the place! GO BELLA!
karen4honor chapter 4 . 6/24/2015
WHOOSH! There went my heart, going all pitter-pat!
mrs.cody simpson chapter 22 . 6/9/2015
One of the best fanfictions I have ever read!
anon chapter 22 . 5/12/2015
I never cry when I read things, like never ever. Even though I feel the feels pretty hard. But that whole thing with Billy, and when she finally lets go, I actually got tears in my eyes. It was so well done.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/2/2015
Thank you. It was sweet and filled with a variety of amazing kisses. You are an expert fictional kiss maker! hehe..
AngeloutofDarkness chapter 17 . 4/16/2015
Okay. This was my breaking point. I'm sorry but I just can't keep reading this. I officially hate Bella in this story. I understand that what Edward did in New Moon was wrong, but at the same time I can appreciate why he did it. I personally think this was blown WAY out of poportion. And it kind of pisses me of that Edward is blamed for what happened to Brady. In my eyes it can never be his fault. Victoria and Laurent are the only ones to blame. Edward killed James to protect Bella and that is the reason for Victoria's actions. Edward wasn't really to blame for James trying to kill B. So how can he be to blame for Victoria coming after Bella? James, Victoria and Laurent are obviously totally evil and psycho. Don't see how that could be anyone's fault but their own... Jacob and the rest of the pack didn't have to protect Bella. They chose to. Again there is no way that Edward can be blamed... Sorry but that's just how I feel. I can't put myself in Bella's shoes, and maybe that's the problem for me. I would never be continually pissed of and sad that the guy I loved wanted what was best for me. Even if he was wrong. He did it out of love, and honestly, he sees himself as a soulless monster so it is so totally understandable to me why he did what he did. Bella was hell bent on getting changed, and Edward didn't want to take away her soul, her friends and her family. Is that really so wrong? I just don't understand how he deserves so much hatred for such actions...

Your fanfic is obviously very loved, and that's great. But it just wasn't me. I'm sorry if any of this comes off in a really bad way. Hang on to all of the love you get! And thanks for sharing your story. I just had to get my thoughts out...
Comrade'sRoza chapter 22 . 3/27/2015
Absolutely beautiful ... loved it ! I even cried at some parts .
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