Reviews for Seducing Ms Swan
InLustWithEC chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
Wow, poor Edward! He just can't get a break!

Hurry and update, I want to read more!
Aiedail01 chapter 6 . 7/30/2008
That was a REALLY good chapter! You did a great job with their personalities and everything. I loved that "Emmett, king of inapropriate comments" line. D
Katsumi-ritsu-kun chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
oh this story is so interesting please keep it up. There are some slight Grammar mistakes just a bit. I just know Edward is gonna have trouble explaining this xD
Lelly.Is.Love chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
This Is An Amazing Story.

krm4 chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
Oh MY! ... Edward just can't seem to catch a break...

I just love this story! I have been reading on Twilighted, and I am so glad you are posting here so I can be notified when you post a new chapter! I hope that you have lots of time and can post often! I am looking forward to where the story goes!
ChanelBell7887 chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
This story is flippin awesome! I read it all today and couldn't stop! Update like now!
Brooklynn10 chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
update as soon as you possibly can! like right now! I have to find out what happens! lol
Brooklynn10 chapter 5 . 7/29/2008
I'm ready to slap Bella. lol

great story!
freeatlas chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
Please continue this story . . . I'm really enjoying it. Don't let the release of Breaking Dawn deter your creativity!
intoxicatingly.dazzled chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
Love this story! Please finish ASAP, I'm eating nails! THis is a cliffhanger, and I'm about to fall off.
VirginiaLee93 chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
i love this story )

please update soon
Riley Grant chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Wow...that's really great. Really great. It is by far the most interesting and well written piece of twilight fanfic I've read. It's so much more creative than the twilight work usually is. I would really like to say that I am both amazed and impressed that you stay so true to the characters in the book (not only Bella and Edward but all of the Cullens) but you are also somehow able to make both Edward and Bella a bit more interesting. Most other authors would have her initially deny her feels than she'd fall to pieces and he'd know how she truly felt and they'd look into each other's eyes and walk off into the sunset. But you have them both acting irrationally and slightly juvenile which is much more true to life and much more interesting. I loved Bella talking to Edwards "Parents" that was so amazing. I was literally laughing out loud through that entire section. It was great. I know you have a million posts telling you this but please update soon! Sorry this comment is so long...I just had a lot to say.
Breeze.x chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
OH That was really good! Update Soon! You left me hanging there!
ReachingAsIFall chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
First off, I am so happy that you put this up on fanfiction

2nd, Man! Why do you have to leave it there. I want to find out what happens! Please o please update soon!
momofab chapter 8 . 7/28/2008
Oh no! Another road block! I love this story. Bella needs to have happiness. Come on Edward, spit it out!
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