|Reviews for Some Sense|
| snow eopard chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Oh woww I love personally I think she should have chosen Jake
| GeezerWench chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
So many possible story lines could branch out from practically every decision that Bella could make. Or not make.
You wrote this well.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
whatever happened after that
| NYC Girl chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I really loved this story. It was a well-written way to see what could have happened in Eclipse. I agree that Jacob would have been a much healthier choice for Bella, and if she chose him, Edward would still protect her. I have one question though: it says that Riley was behind them in his wolf form, but Riley is a vampire? :)
| angel lee wolf chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
good just wish there was more
angel lee wolf
| secretfunnelcake chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Yes. YES. This is how I wanted it to be, this is how it should've went. Why doesn't anyone else realize this? How healthy this decision would be for her? I just, I dont get people...
Alright. Sorry, I'm done. This, this fic was good. I really enjoyed how you wrote it, and I liked hearing what Bella thought, because this is how it should've been...Anyways, excellent job. I wish that you would continue.
| DeletedFanficAccount chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Even though I hate anything BXJ related..
Damn! If Stephenie Meyer wrote like this, I wouldn't mind Bella choosing Jacob!
| jacoblover2552 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
All i have to say is...WOW I LOVED IT KEEP WRITING the tittle totally makes sense i mean bella jacob sounds good i loved it can't wait to reaad chapter 2 yea
| Esper Kay chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Wow, you've really got Meyer's writing style down. Yay for BellaxJacob goodness.
| Regan chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Oh wow, excellent writing! And kinda what I hope will happen in the fourth book (squeal!)
| minipoison chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
i wish that was how it really happened in the book even though now im a conformed jasper lover... i hate edward with a passion but jake is better to be with than edward so im happy.
| Lady-Isowen chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Once again my interest is peaked...please update! :D
| shaketramp chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
"I chose Jacob. I chose a beating heart at the same time that I chose to keep mine beating. I chose the air and the sun, rather than the drug for the dream. I made the natural selection. His love was my love, mine his."
i love this line. absolutely amazing.