|Reviews for Just Breathe In|
| SNAPE IS SNAPE chapter 2 . 9/6/2013
I like this story. Had no idea Julie Dawn Colr disliked chocolate.
| SNAPE IS SNAPE chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
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| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
This is a great chapter! I like how you kept the 1971 Veruca in character so well-the temper, the shouting, and the being aggressive. And I can't wait to read the rest of the story either. It sounds quite awesome, and very neat, as well. :)
Keep up your awesome, superb, creative writing! :)
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
Brilliant! I love both the 1971 and the 2005 versions of Veruca Salt! They're both so good when it comes to being spoiled.
Keep up your awesome writing!
| Yva J chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
You've got a great start here. I loved the '71 Veruca, she was so bratty and nasty that it was just interesting to watch her. It's nice to see another Veruca story being posted. My only hope is that your chapters will be a little bit longer. The only thing I figured that after that trip down the garbage shoot, that dress would be beyond hope. ;)
Otherwise, everything is really good and in character. Poor Henry Salt, he's really got a bad egg. Hehehe.
Please, post more soon, this is a good idea and it's nice to see what happens to the other kids after the factory.