|Reviews for Citizen Hunter|
| Freya922 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Really interesting exploration of the Winchesters having to cope with plain old human evil. Well done!
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Heh. It's one thing to run afoul of the supernatural and then another thing entirely to get involved with a mafia hitman. Because he'll keep coming after you until he's fed up with getting knocked out and will just shoot first. There was no way Sam was going to be able to keep Dean from stopping the guy. But I'm glad they found that compromise.
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Awesome. I figure Dean would go after the hitman without Sam knowing. But I loved it that they give him a curses watch. That was much better. I hate to say this but Dean is a Mother bear when it comes to Samm getting or all most killed.
| desdi chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Ami nagyon tetszik ebben a fic-ben, az az első mondat és a téma. Nagyon tetszik, amikor egy történet valamilyen felvezetővel kezdődik, kicsit messzebbről indul, neked ezt mindig sikerül eltalálnod nálam!
A téma pedig, well, mindig szeretem, ha nem valamilyen rendes 'hunt' van a középpontban, hanem egy teljesen "hétköznapi" dolog, amibe a fiúk is belefutnak időről-időre, mint amilyen egy hitman.
És persze ki kell emelni Dean sajátos igazságszolgáltatását is. Tökéletes leszámolási mód. Olyan Dean-es. )
| Whilom chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Okay, you win major bonus points with me if you've got protective!Dean and hurt!Sam. Therefore, this fic is great. ;)
You melted me into a puddle of goo with this exchange: **“Don’t promise,” Sam whispered, too tired to fight sleep any longer. “Don’t promise what you can’t…”
Dean’s voice was right next to his ear, hoarse and fervent and rock-solid. “I promise, Sam.”**
I liked the last line, too. Trust Dean to keep deep stuff light.
| liliaeth chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Cool story :-)
| BlueSea14 chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
This was excellent. Way, way protective 'mama-bear' Dean looking out for Sam-willing to kill for Sam, which he himself said in the series (that line about being afraid of what he's willing to do or kill for his family). No, I'm not condoning killing someone with a cursed object, but I can see how Dean and Sam would finally get fed up and deal with it in their way. :)
| finajk chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
hehe ''We don't kill humans... unless they're threatening Sammy.'' Nice job, thanks
| Stoneage Woman chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
I really liked this. The watch idea was brilliant, it really was their kind of stories rule.
| zookitty chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
hahah Sam's real psychic power is attracting trouble, nicely put K! aw Dean standing over him protectively! I LOVE IT! -grins-
-“Yes, Dean, I think the gun and shotgun and hunting knife and mace you left me will be enough to handle one guy if he comes after me again.”- LOL! That is just awesome
great story! So suspenseful! Bravo!
| faith-in-Faith chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Bir brother Dean protecting Sam from the bad guys. I don't need to say more. You know that's my favorite kind of fic! :)
But what I liked more with this one was Sam's trust in Dean. No matter what, he thought his brother would fix it. I also liked how smug he was when Dean went after the bad guys :D
| irismay42 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
This was really different from a lot of fics out there just because it not only deals with a supernatural hunt but also with something very "real world" such as the mob, or witnessing a crime and being afraid to tell anyone in fear of your life. You dovetailed the two stories really well - and I especially liked your solution to the boys' problem, enabling them to ensure the hitman was punished for his crime(s) but they weren't the ones doing the actual punishing...
| PADavis chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I just adore these longer pieces of yours. And this was excellent - loved the mob, Dean standing over Sam, his determination to cover Sam's back, and poor hurt Sam.
I admit I had some trouble with the mob guy showing up with Sam's real name, after what appeared to be no more than a glance at his face, in the dark, resources or not. If they followed him to the motel, finding him and everything else follows for me. But the name, what do you do traveling the country ... I guess I just underestimate the mob huh?
| tanpopo no hana chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
As always, I really like it when they have to go up against human enemies. It just adds something to the threat that's not there otherwise... And Dean's protective streak in overdrive never fails to make my day :D
I didn't get the joke at the end though. California bar? *feels dumb*
| Landwing chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
That was pretty cool. The Winchesters meet organized crime. An interesting question to pose to this setup, too: when you hunt and fight evil and monsters, what do you do when they're human? Even police officers are required to prevent a gunman from taking innocent lives. They're required to use nonlethal means if at all possible, but if it's not possible they have to prevent the taking of innocent lives. And admittedly, the boys have different means of stopping people, but the rules still apply. And all the time, I'm hearing Dean say, "I'll say it again: demons I get; people are crazy."