|Reviews for Last Goodbyes|
| guest chapter 33 . 4/12
wait i dont get the ending help fred what book what
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/7
You have got so many things wrong it is driving me crazy. I'm sorry. But please fix at least the part about albums having white hair. Also Draco married and had Scorpio and taking that out would destroy the cursed child
| Annnnnnnna chapter 25 . 11/27/2016
Okay sorry, third review in a row. I just always forget something. :D
It's about the kids and some names:
1. You called Regulus (Black) twice RegulAs and (Blaize) Zabini ZaMbini. Even if it's completely unimportant, it annoyed me quite much. (I'm sorry). I just love these names.
2. James Arthur Potter is originally called James Sirius. Didn't you know or was it intentional? :) Oh and, I love to think about James being EXACTLY like the marauder James, but looking a bit different (brown-reddish-hair with his brown eyes). And then, Albus Severus who looks exactly like Harry (black hair, green eyes) and being quite and intelligent. :)
| Annnnna chapter 20 . 11/26/2016
Oh, and what I forgot :
You should listen to the song "Forth of July" by Sufjan Stevens while reading, because it fits so well.
Thanks to this song, I cried even harder. :')
| Annnnnna chapter 22 . 11/26/2016
I'm not finished yet (chapter Dean/Seamus) but I'm truly loving it and wanted to leave a comment.
First of all, the first two chapters (Harry, George) plus the Dennis-one made me cry like a little baby. They were so indescribably beautiful and sad.
I love your concept of the "after-life" (this heaventhing). Being the biggest fan of the marauders, nothing could be more comforting than to know them happy and together and causing trouble like they were before the war.
Of course, I also loved many more things about this fanfic.
What I would have looooved to see (I know it's probably too late but still) is a wormtail-chapter. Imagine -just imagine- him having escaped a second time, him pretending to be dead and living the life of a rat again. And then, him finding the ring. Imagine what he would have felt seeing James again, or Remus. Imagine him wanting to apologize, because he truly loved his friends. He just loved himself more. Because that's what I like to think - that Peter made this decision because he was too scared of death, and/or because he never felt accepted by James and the others. And, that he regretted the mistakes he made, that nights, he cried over the loss of his only true friends.
Imagine ending the chapter with Peter committing suicide (a real one this time), because of the loneliness and the sadness and the regret.
| PheonixFyre374 chapter 33 . 10/4/2016
Wow. This fanfic made me frickin' cry, of all things. I've been on this ride with our beloved characters, and, your fanfic seemed like such a fitting ending... Thank You for an amazing read.
| XxbooblesxX chapter 5 . 8/10/2016
I read this when I was really tired, and somehow I read Dumblemort instead of Voldemort :/ I was like WTF WHYYY!
| misherukuro chapter 11 . 12/26/2015
A good read thanks for the fic.
| LightInTheDark245 chapter 33 . 10/30/2015
i love it
you've made me cry so often
| GingerHannah chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
Loved this! So many unanswered questions, but perhaps it's better that way.
| GingerHannah chapter 21 . 9/19/2015
Yes! Charlie/Ben(Draco)! I was totally shipping it, but didn't think it would actually happen.
But I don't think this line is true: "No Death Eater was capable of something as human, as raw and vulnerable, as true love."
| GingerHannah chapter 20 . 9/19/2015
Confession from Draco! Yay! Can't wait to see how the others take this. Particularly when they find out some people already knew.
| GingerHannah chapter 6 . 9/18/2015
I hope Draco becomes one of the regular characters who make appearances in this story. I love him as Ben- reformed, but not too reformed, still quite Malfoy.
| GingerHannah chapter 2 . 9/18/2015
This was heartwrenching. In a way I felt worse eeading this then I did when he died in the book. The emotion in this was so real.
Also, going back to chapter 1, I liked the fact that Lily's patronus was a doe before she met James, not because of him.
| Peonywinx chapter 33 . 4/24/2015
This was beautiful. Absolutely, completely, magnificently beautiful. It's incredibly difficult to get me to cry while reading a fanfiction, because I have to be in the right "mood" to cry - and even if the story is sad beyond all measure, if I'm not in the right mood the tears won't flow - but this story was so lovely and so emotional that even though I didn't cry, I WANTED to.
I love the idea of circulating the Resurrection Ring, of each user adding their own stories to the book, of the concept of Heaven as it is portrayed here (of course the Marauders would be the troublemakers-in-chief), of Luna and Seamus and Dean living together, of Dennis being Hagrid's surrogate son, of Cho and Oliver, of a living Fred in a portrait, of regular get-togethers of the large circle of friends and family in the Leaky Cauldron, Weasley's Wizard Wheezes, the Burrow, wherever. The only thing I'm not a big fan of is the Charlie/Ben pairing, not because I'm against gay characters, but because I don't see either of them as gay.
Regardless, I enjoyed this story very much, and I was genuinely shocked when you killed Justin and Mr. and Mrs. Weasley. With regards to Fred, all through the story, I kept waiting on tenterhooks for the shoe to drop, for his inevitable return to the afterlife, and I honestly thought we were going to end with Fred finally leaving - but at least you ended it on a happy note, and he came back more alive than before (though I am very curious as to how he did it).
Wonderful story, I enjoy your writing very much.