|Reviews for First Born|
| BonneNuit chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
Sex scene was good, poor ickle Ichigo!
| kellymarianandanne chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
ha ha excellent: is grimmjaw going to be nice? i mean like later? o i'm so excited for the next chapter...please update soon!
| die blaue Rose chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
I feel so sorry for itichigo! but I'm curious as to what the others (itchigo's friends) are doing? arent they gonna at least TRY to save him?UPDATE SOON!
| benihime.chan chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
i think ur rape sceen was good
pleze updait soon
| DazedDoomsday chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Cool story idea. Can't wait for more
| die blaue Rose chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
though I rarely read bleach fics I have to say that I cant wait to read more about this one! :3 so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :]
| WhiteTenshi chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
wow cant wait to see what happens next!update soon!
| kellymarianandanne chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
excellent: can't wait until the next chapter! please update soon!
| xRandomHeartsx chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
oh I can't wait to see how this turns out :)
I'm on summer break and wouldn't mind being your beta for this story, if someone hasn't already been picked.
go GrimmIchi! :D
| Kisa-June chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
*Claps* Congrats, this is pretty good. A few grammer errors here and there, but managed to keep my attention the whole time. Please keep writing and update soon :D
| T-gal chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Your plot is fun and good, but I suggest getting a beta-reader for grammar errors...there were quite a few...I like it so far!Go Go Grimmjow!
| BonneNuit chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Love this, original and fun! :) It's rare that stories like these are accompanied with good writing, but you managed.
| benihime.chan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I LOVE THE STORY!
i was going to do somthing like this,but im a total nube that cant spell
keep it going
| Icy moon86 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
a GrimmIchi Mpreg, it's been a while since I read one.