Reviews for First Born
Sacred Beast117 chapter 2 . 8/1/2008
This seems very interesting

Think you could update soon?
BonneNuit chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
Sex scene was good, poor ickle Ichigo!
kellymarianandanne chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
ha ha excellent: is grimmjaw going to be nice? i mean like later? o i'm so excited for the next chapter...please update soon!
die blaue Rose chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
I feel so sorry for itichigo! but I'm curious as to what the others (itchigo's friends) are doing? arent they gonna at least TRY to save him?UPDATE SOON!
benihime.chan chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
i think ur rape sceen was good

pleze updait soon

ur fan

DazedDoomsday chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Cool story idea. Can't wait for more
die blaue Rose chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
though I rarely read bleach fics I have to say that I cant wait to read more about this one! :3 so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :]
WhiteTenshi chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
wow cant wait to see what happens next!update soon!
kellymarianandanne chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
excellent: can't wait until the next chapter! please update soon!
xRandomHeartsx chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
oh I can't wait to see how this turns out :)

I'm on summer break and wouldn't mind being your beta for this story, if someone hasn't already been picked.

go GrimmIchi! :D

Kisa-June chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
*Claps* Congrats, this is pretty good. A few grammer errors here and there, but managed to keep my attention the whole time. Please keep writing and update soon :D
T-gal chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Your plot is fun and good, but I suggest getting a beta-reader for grammar errors...there were quite a few...I like it so far!Go Go Grimmjow!
BonneNuit chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Love this, original and fun! :) It's rare that stories like these are accompanied with good writing, but you managed.
benihime.chan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008

i was going to do somthing like this,but im a total nube that cant spell

keep it going

Icy moon86 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008

a GrimmIchi Mpreg, it's been a while since I read one.

Keep writing
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