Reviews for Job Offer
ssbailey chapter 9 . 7/29/2008
I love how you update so quickly but that doesn't give me a lot of time to review SO I'll pretend I'm Abby and I'll talk a lot in this one to make up for it. :) Anyways I love how they are dancing around each other, each almost feeling the same thing, but not knowing the other feels that way. I also love the fact that you had Abby dress somewhat non-Goth for the dinner, but still in her normal black. I love her just like she is, but sometimes I wish they would show the more sophisticated side of her every once in a while. I also loved how you described their reactions to each other when he showed up to pick her up to head over to Ducky's. I was totally able to relate. :) Another plus in this story would be Abby's thoughts on Gibbs like when she thinks things like "Black usually aided to mask the parts of your body you want to hide from others; however, on Gibbs it defined and highlighted every muscled detail." anyways great chapter and I can't wait for the next one so we can see the reactions from everyone on how good Abby looks and we can meet the eccentric Ms. Mallard. :)
Sorgina chapter 9 . 7/29/2008
Hot! hot!
Sorgina chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
getting interesting and interesting - want more chapters please!
KellyRoxton chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
Oh so Ducky was having them to dinner without them knowing it when they were fighting is when he asked that would have made for a most interesting night Hint for another story... Grins and runs off. Great chapter.
KellyRoxton chapter 7 . 7/29/2008
The music swells as we wait patiently to see what happens next. What happens next have you posted it yet? Come on what are ya waiting for come on little one where is the next chapter...

Great Job can't wait to read more. Aww that kiss totally rocked.
KellyRoxton chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
I sure hope he doesn't leave... Kiss her senseless Yes but maybe too much happens and she... So what is the title meant for maybe she has taken another job offer and will be leaving and he doesn't know I know Abby needs to be wooed and he's just the old fashioned type to do it :) Grins and runs off to check if you have written more. Ohh looks like there is some more updates from you. Yippee! dashes off to read them...

Write more soon.

GAbbyRules The world
Sorgina chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
Wow! What a cliffhanger !
KellyRoxton chapter 4 . 7/28/2008
Ouch poor Abby he just turned tail and ran. What was he thinking I see in the future another head slap to his head.

Gah... Man Gibbs poor Abby not herself and alone in despair and prolly feeling every crazy emotion.

Write More Soon.


GAbby all the way.
Sorgina chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Hey! you can't leave us like that - want to know what's going to happen next :-)
KellyRoxton chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
Wow What a story. GRINS... Actually I was liking the little bit of angst that the first chapter had and the fact that maybe she could be lured away if Gibbs pushed her hard enough away trying to protect his feelings.


GReat Job.. Can't wait to read more chapters.
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