|Reviews for Zenith Perspective|
| Kampretzz chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Hmm, it is strange to tell story in 3 POV, kinda redundant, but maybe you have something planning about it. The plot is still not clear right now, hopefully i will get clearer in next chapter.
| dylanredefined chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Ok whats going on here ?left us on a cliff hanger grr lol.
Bit repetitive but not sure how you could do the scene from 3 diffrent view points without it seeming so .It also seems rushed to me .
One other point I know Rei is a socially isolated clone but making her eat peanut butter everyday is a bit cruel its a vile
product and the work of satan so surely as half angel she would n't eat it :)?