|Reviews for Ssshhh! It's a secret|
| Nikki Marie Chaos chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Hehehe, I love your story, very well written and everything!
| bLuE hAiReD dErP chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
this story was cute :)
| Lazlo Pizazzlo chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Yay! Meta Knight got a surprise How ironic that he didn't think anything of it, huh? ;) Maybe he knew but just didn't want to acknowledge it. XD;
Very nice story! My only tips for this time is to sometimes replace your "because"'s with semicolons (;). Here, how about a LazloTitan trademarked example? [slips on graduation hat and pulls out pointer]
Instead of "This was really odd because usually one or both would be in there doing something.", do this:
Odd; usually Dedede and/or Escargon would be in the room carrying out their ordinary evil schemes.
Get it? XP Sorry if I'm being blunt again. I really hope I'm not being TOO mean. I like yer stories a whole lot and I hope to see more of you soon!
| Grievous daydreamer chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
*squee* adorable! _ Damn that was cute. :D
| EmpoweredWolfWrath chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Fumu's a joykill! :P
anyhoos... this was pretty good.
i loved the part where you made kirby looked like a little meta knight!
| Ivy Starr chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
lol nice work.