|Reviews for The Mercury Chronicles: Angelica|
| amr56 chapter 7 . 10/9/2015
Wow, I really liked this a lot. Poor Albus. I am glad he was able to give it a try with Angelica though, I liked her. I like that you made the Gryffindors the crazy outcasts, as in canon they are as prejudiced as the Slytherins. I like that the rest of the school is banding together and I hope the Gryffindors join in soon.
| Needle In A Haystack chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
Just read all of that in one sitting, and it was probably the most dramatic. Very nicely written, all emotions captured. Please keep writing, especially the chronicles!
| Julia Claire chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
I don't want to feel bad for Albus, but I kind of do, even if he did deserve it. Anyway, good chapter. The characters all feel so real.
| Julia Claire chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Sorry I've taken so long to get back to these! This was great - I love Albus and Angelica. I also really enjoyed what they told James they were up to during their walks.
| Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 7 . 3/26/2010
That was simply fabulous! ;)
I loved how it all went... Hahahaha
These three's personalities... are very unexpected but I thnk it totally works. *giggles* What with who their parents are.
Although, I did love the idea of Angelica and Albus together... I wasn't all that shock when they broke up. (Don't really believe in 'long-distance' relationships... *rollseyes*)
Anyways, I'll be reading more from your port. I'm totallyhaving an awesome time there! :D
| Stenstyren chapter 7 . 12/25/2009
Your Mercury stories are truly amazing! If you would have written them as a fic from 1st to 7th year it would probably have been a bit boring but the oneshots and short stories coming in no real chronological order really makes things awesome!
One thing that I can perhaps complain a little bit about is the torture scene. You never really told us WHY they would go to such extreme measures. I mean, this was way worse then anything most kids would come up with since it was so calculating.
Also, the adults reaction to the whole thing was a bit lame. It would have been more in character for them to tear into the children and severely punish them for several years or something.
But, as I said, this is an awesome story and I very much look forward to further installments in the series. Keep up the good work:)
| verity candor chapter 7 . 8/31/2009
/haha! Spectacular epilogue... and thank you thank you thank you for holding the magic-of-true-love spiel...the last line just goes to show what wonderfully diabolical creatures they are, and why we love them for it... ahh.
| goldeneyedgirl247 chapter 7 . 8/25/2009
Aww. I loved the romance while it lasted. I can't wait for more.
| hermionesw chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
Oh my god that was so beautiful. Either you're a brilliant writer or this has happened to you. If it has I'm sorry it happened. But I actually learnt something from this story (surprise since I never do), when you have truly have best friends that stick to your hip if you have another and a relationship develops and it doesn't work, your best friends will be there for you.
| xoxcrescentmoonxox chapter 7 . 8/21/2009
Oh, poor Albus! Is it bad that I was giggling through most of the fic because of your one liners? Well, anyway, I like this realistic conclusion you gave them - it's sad, but it's life. I really liked the scene with Rose and Scorius; love Albus's "et tu, Scorpius", and the exploding rat :) Really good last chapter - will there be any more Mercury in the near future?
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 7 . 8/20/2009
You probably got this a lot, but this was truly sweet. Sorry about Angelica, though. You really know how to draw the reader in and I love you using different styles, which completely tell the story where the reader (me) felt like a real part of it. Excellent.
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 6 . 8/20/2009
"I’ll be a proud member of the Salem Institute of Witches class of 2024." Had I read this before I wrote my CW, I might have used that instead of Salem School for Young Witches and Wizards.
I'm loving this story, by the way.
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 4 . 8/20/2009
This was very clever; it's something I've wanted to do. You pulled it off brilliantly.
| Nongarak chapter 7 . 8/20/2009
Oh come one. 8 months, and you give us an ending? Ripoff!
Just kidding. I loved it! I must admit, I had to go back and reread the last chapter to kind of understand it. I liked it, and somehow, it doesn't surprise me. I hope you some day decide to continue with these characters, if not the trio, and best of luck with all the rest of your endeavors. I shall be eagerly awaiting them.
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 3 . 8/20/2009
I had to comment on this chapter because I really liked it, it was extremely sweet it really said more than simple narration.