Reviews for Line Influence
Halan Lore chapter 2 . 8/1/2008



Byakugon from Neji

Oh and on any plausible pairings don't make it NaruHina
Kammari chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
alright chapter.
Kammari chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
it is interesting but seem kinda rushed.
Sillusion chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
It's quite clear that your fic doesn't suck.

You want something that sucks? Mine fit the bill.

Your first chapter on the otherhand has me waiting for the second eagerly, as I can't wait for Naruto to learn his bloodline.

(Also: Naruto will be equipped with the best combo ever- Shadow Clones the Yamanaka Mind Transfer? He could set an enemy army to attack its' own village.

Congrats on a great start, and good luck with your future chapters. ]

Halan Lore chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
-squeezes KageHana in death hug-

write some more, really go and write more! ... uh please? Sorry just I really think that... yeah...
Wolfkun chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
It does not suck. As long as Naruto doesn't just go super-powerful it'll be fine. Eventually he can become super, sure. I mean look at canon! But I think this story has great potential to show some family and exploration of personalities- even in flashbacks.
MastermindZangetsu99 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
nope.. it dont suck.. just keep writing plz
delete this acc plz chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
fuck a cliffhanger :p not nice dude :p
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