Reviews for A Thing to Prove
Vampire Princess Yuki chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Damn you! You write so awesomely!( I know that awesomely is not a real word ) I seriously think that you should've continued this story. I wanted to see the ending (even though I can guess how it'll end). ANYWAYS, CONTINUE ONWARDS, MY FELLOW MANGA-LOVER !
alohagirl chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Wow..I'm really impressed. This is your first writing and already it is so well written. Thanks
zenophobiaz chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Hehe so adorable! :) this was so much fun to read! :3 so so so adorable azuma-kahoko will always be my favorite! :3 hehe

thank you so much for all of your hard work and I wonder if there is going to be more to this story? :) you have done such an awesome job and your stories are truly so fun to read hope you will update your stories soon!
Eliza chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Great work.
ayano-san chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
i liked the chapter alot but why did u abandon it ...could have continued the story...u know.
Mei Marino chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
wahahahahah hi dear... :P I just read this now! LOL sorry for being late, but now's the only tie I found time.. hahaha it's PURE LOVE! I LOVE IT!

hmm in case you don't know who I am, I'm just a certain japanese tutor of yours :P do drop by on my page sometimes ;) though it's in a complete hiatus, I hope you find some of my works interesting ;) haha see yah at ym dear :P
xxxhainekoxxx chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Kawaii! This story is so cute... Make me want to smile everytime I read it. Good job on making this story! ) ) )
AniGirl 7 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
That was pretty cute! :)
littlehelliongirl chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Yo, ice princess. -curtsies-

Sorry it took me a while to review your story. My apologies, my ever dearest friend.

Dude, dont think that you're not that good. Your stories are pretty cool, ya know. I particularly loved this one. It makes me wanna drool over azuma (the dark one). hahah. You just need a few tweaks here and there but over all, this is REALLY good.

Two thumbs up!

p.s. I'm working on the neuro yunoki stories. I'll send it to you ASAP. heheh.

keep it up!

-hellionprincess-
Neon-Fantasy chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
This was very good for your first fic. It was cute and I love Azuma and Kahoko as a pairing. I liked how you portrayed dark Azuma in this, I love that side of him.

The 'confession' was different as well, it just seemed to come out on the spare of the moment almost :P Typical of Azuma lol.

Great job once again.
DarlingDearestDeadForever chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
They are so perfect for each other!
Blanco chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
That was so good. I really hope you write a sequel!
iruka92 chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Yunoki is unpredictable!

But I love him for that.
sala chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
While not bad for a first attempt, you should really never submit something that YOU are not proud of. If YOU think that it is full of mistakes and is poorly written, what are other people supposed to think? If you honestly believe that this is your best work, then don't apologize for it. If you do not want your friend to read your work, try getting yourself a Beta reader from the many volunteers on this site. :) Good luck with your future endeavors!

Take the advice of a famous Flemish painter Johanes Van Eyck and sign your work: Als ik kan (As Best I Can). [it implies that he can only paint as good as he physically is able, not as well as his imagination would like]
chibiXtenshi chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
...thats the end? plz make another chappy (lol chappy). well at least one more... plz!
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