Reviews for Unseemly Are The Open Eyes
David W. Lutz chapter 2 . 7/28/2008
Very Nice! I liked the feel of the descriptions, how the story moves along! Especially the ending, nice surprise!
Lady Charity chapter 2 . 7/28/2008
Ooh, I like where this is going! This story has a lot of potential. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Your description is very lovely. I especially like the 'labyrinthine streets', the imagery is very nice. Eager for the next chapters!
Lady Charity chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Ooh, I like how this is going. What a twist, Zuko thinking he might lose his bending. The idea is original and interesting. I also like the summary you made for the story, which is intriguing. Moving on to chapter 2!
David W. Lutz chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Wow, a great extra chapter beyond the TV show, and what a cliff-hanger!
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