Reviews for NU: RedX Rising
Robbler chapter 3 . 1/24
I'm sorry, but what?
The build up contradicts itself, the power scale is all over the place and did Naruto just say cutie? Did anyone ever actually do that without feeling like a creep?
That's just... I believe kids these days call it "cringe".
Alas and the classic: The "Naruto must forget his life" no jutsu.

Alright, let's get to it: You are definitely not "the worst", far from it. You had a solid idea.
Working against you from the start was the fact, that Naruto wasn't yet "completed" when you started this story.
However, there are some mistakes you did all on your own (I mean for example: Naruto beating Madara (then suddenly it's Obito and then Madara again, what?) being like an afterthought in the intro of this story).
The fighting scenes are just... bad. There's nothing else that needs to be said about them, but the fact that you either had no beta or no skilled beta during all of this. You could probably salvage this story, but it's quite old and I don't think you'd really want to put the work into it. Seems like a "beginner" story anyway (not meant as an insult, but as an honest: We all started somewhere).

Hope your doing good, see ya.
chrismayweidow chapter 46 . 9/30/2024
Chapter 47 is giving me the error report please fix
dastewie2012 chapter 15 . 9/28/2023
Naruto made another s rank technique kakashi is dead my dude.
Sage of the Azure Phoenix chapter 29 . 6/19/2023
I like the story.

Best story that has Kitten more in a positibe light, and considering she's like Naruto in his younger years.
dastewie2012 chapter 54 . 2/1/2023
Plot progression with op characters is so difficult and so upsetting
dastewie2012 chapter 54 . 2/1/2023
I get that it’s for plot progression but come the fon. “I ain’t playing around no more.” Proceeds to do things that are less severe than everything he’s done thus far. Rip the man’s soul already and kill the fire wraiths. Nothing stopping you.
dastewie2012 chapter 51 . 2/1/2023
Interesting take. Literally robins trials to the true master naruto style
redeyehawk23 chapter 3 . 1/21/2023
I feel like I'm missing a lot of context reading this, but I'm hoping it gives me some later.
Clonebustering chapter 58 . 1/18/2023
Continue season 5 man and who knows have Tartarus help against the brotherhood of evil.
iamshinydragonmist chapter 28 . 11/3/2022
Danny phantom ref nice
iamshinydragonmist chapter 21 . 11/3/2022
grim adventures reference
Damien Evermere chapter 35 . 10/19/2022
he's not gone sage mode?
Guest chapter 15 . 8/28/2022
This story is so good I've been reading for so long my butt went numb ten minutes ago
StarBoundDisaster chapter 9 . 8/3/2022
You lost me with this one. Doing pretty well too, oh well.
Excited dude chapter 9 . 8/1/2022
What if instead of a DC AU where Naruto comes here, this is the original teen titans universe but because Naruto has become Red X the universe was trying to right itself by making Naruto act like the original Red X!
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