Reviews for NU: RedX Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but what? The build up contradicts itself, the power scale is all over the place and did Naruto just say cutie? Did anyone ever actually do that without feeling like a creep? That's just... I believe kids these days call it "cringe". Alas and the classic: The "Naruto must forget his life" no jutsu. Alright, let's get to it: You are definitely not "the worst", far from it. You had a solid idea. Working against you from the start was the fact, that Naruto wasn't yet "completed" when you started this story. However, there are some mistakes you did all on your own (I mean for example: Naruto beating Madara (then suddenly it's Obito and then Madara again, what?) being like an afterthought in the intro of this story). The fighting scenes are just... bad. There's nothing else that needs to be said about them, but the fact that you either had no beta or no skilled beta during all of this. You could probably salvage this story, but it's quite old and I don't think you'd really want to put the work into it. Seems like a "beginner" story anyway (not meant as an insult, but as an honest: We all started somewhere). Hope your doing good, see ya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 47 is giving me the error report please fix |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto made another s rank technique kakashi is dead my dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story. Best story that has Kitten more in a positibe light, and considering she's like Naruto in his younger years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plot progression with op characters is so difficult and so upsetting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get that it’s for plot progression but come the fon. “I ain’t playing around no more.” Proceeds to do things that are less severe than everything he’s done thus far. Rip the man’s soul already and kill the fire wraiths. Nothing stopping you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting take. Literally robins trials to the true master naruto style |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like I'm missing a lot of context reading this, but I'm hoping it gives me some later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue season 5 man and who knows have Tartarus help against the brotherhood of evil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danny phantom ref nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() grim adventures reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() he's not gone sage mode? |
![]() ![]() This story is so good I've been reading for so long my butt went numb ten minutes ago |
![]() ![]() ![]() You lost me with this one. Doing pretty well too, oh well. |
![]() ![]() What if instead of a DC AU where Naruto comes here, this is the original teen titans universe but because Naruto has become Red X the universe was trying to right itself by making Naruto act like the original Red X! |