Before I go any farther my assumption from chapter 24 this pink X has to be inner sakura taking over

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I can't wait for the sequel, continuation, next chapter, whatever. it was great.

I just cant do it. I gave it a shot. Got completely though the first seven chapters. Had to skim up to chapter thirteen. Now i cant continue. You had a great concept but you muddled it up with extraneous material like the konoha team and the red x suit. Further more, you have absolutely no sence of proportion. Pittin characters like robin against your supposedly s-rank naruto shoul be like pitting superman withought any weaknesses against batman. Instead he always ends up struggling. I get it. You want it to seem like he's just having fun. Toying with his opponents. Instead it just just cones off as ineffective and uninspired. Too bad. This could have been an absolutely amazing fic. Nice try though...

"You are so lucky I'm not an assassin…" REALLY!? You fracking piece of shite. ...What do you you think ninja are?

In all I really enjoyed the story. The only issues I really had was it could have used a proof reading before upload as well as that you overuse the word thus. Maybe you could replace it with therefore or other synonyms.

Wowie this took forever but it was so good can't wait till you continue this hope it's asap and if only you wrote some lemons this fic will be the best fic I've ever read

I'm probably not going to be able to keep reading this. I spend part of my time bored by the character interactions. Another part is the disappointing fight scenes.

Naruto can't seem to remain a static character. His skill level is completely dependent upon the authors whim on that particular fight. Also there are just random quirks that really erk me. Like when Naruto randomly teleports while standing still and then suddenly he has to catch his breath. How do you lose your breath teleporting when you do it all the time?

First love the the grimm adventures of Billy and Mandy reference
And secondly damn bats kicked his ass gotta say I was expecting bat to lose cause most writers forget that despite the fact batman is only human he's still skilled annove to go for to toe with the best meta humans
I'm happy you did not make that mistake.

Way too much OOC angst from Kakashi.

You write the hokage like he's a scandalized mother whose child just said a bad word.

Masterly done good sir. Bravo! Bravo! Outstanding! Amazing! Just like all of your other stories, you sir, create a splendid balance of masterful charachter interactions, fight scenes, and story building through the denizens of the universe!

Truly, a masterpiece!

Dude, epic freaking story... keep up the superb work.

that...was a shitty deal.

Why so difficult to bust Harley out when you can use clones and henge?!