Boooooo! Bad! How can Naruto be manhanded by Batman if he is an S-rank Shinobi?! He defeated easily his friends and Kakashi while Batman is a mere human. Even if he have teh reflects to match Naruto on 25% of his skills, Naruto is much stronger. I hope you don't do this too much.

It would have been nice to see what this author could've done with later information, but its still pretty good nonetheless.

"Geese, why so serious"

I totally didnt get a picture in my head about an army of Geese swimming to war.

Clap clap clap very well done lol your intro kinda reminds me of my all time favorite games "War... War never changes..."

Dude amazing story. You had me at the edge of my charging chord with every chapter. I loved the ending although I was a bit diss appointed it actually had to end.

Dude awesome story wish it could never end

I incredible story! Extrem complex and well written. I simply love it! Only sad that the sequel never happened because there were a few cliffhangers.

I'm fine with the story as is. Just having a problem with the spelling and a little grammar here and there.

...oh boy. where to begin...let's not.

their, they're, there. Some of these are mixed up in the wrong place. Vegeta: "I'm just Saiyan." (Saiya-jin) Saying...

All according to keikaku...

I recognised those. Thanks bro.

So is naruto going to end up with JUST Karasu-chan or... (pervy giggle) a mini-harem ;)

Please keep going for the people like me who are now gron addicted to the storey and to see how it goes on from here so ask not only for me but for all the readers of .NU:red x rising

What's up with the kyuubi he's super passive aggressive and hates naruto with a passion. While really he and naruto had been respectful friendship that evolved to the point where they were like brothers. But if it works out for the story who cares? What ever happened to naruto's bijuu mode like Seriously man.