Meh, kinda bad kinda good, Idk how to feel, it's good for being like what, 10 years old? no doubt if it had been created at the end of shippuden it would've been many times better though.

Why in THE WORLD WOULD A PORTAL STAY OPEN THAT LONG? No summoner/conjurer in existence would make a spell to have a portal stay open THAT LONG, it would allow all sorts of GARBAGE through (this story is proof)

Thanks man you gave me some new super awesome songs to add to my favorites list they're really really good and I got so many good chills as I read them while listening to the lyrics on my other phone so thanks a lot awesome Story by the way I love it.

Maybe this story was before it but naruto and Kurama are friends like best buds him plotting with ravens father doesn't really make sense even in the universe you created if it's after he defeated Madara uhiha because him and K urama had to become buds to unlock the none tailed sage of six paths transformation

Wow... The first time i read this story was around two years ago and all i can say is that at the time i liked this story. Now after two years and a ton of fics being read in all that time i cant really say the same thing... I mean, Gray Naruto whose words sounds more like an excuse to do not do something plus angst, overpowered Naruto that is as strong as the plot demands it sometimes, Sasuke and Sakura characterization being a gross exageration of their worse traits turned up to the eleven plus bashing... among other things.

Things that arent very appealing in a fic... specially the bashing.

And this ended as a Jinx-Naruto-Raven thing? Seriously?

dear writer please make more chapters

I'm done.

if naruto defeated kakashi neji and sasuke at the same time, how is he struggling against robin?

So, which Naruto Ultimate came first?

Badass intro so captivating. In looking forward to reading this

Wow this had to be the most bullshit fight you ever wrote. I don't mean to insult, but every actions could have been avoided with even one jutsu, every explanation you used for the Batman to win a fight where he should have been outclassed just threw away about chakra and its properties and Naruto's way of fighting was so far from what he usually does that your Sasuke would feel insulted.

I know a lot of author can rightly think the Batman can fight everything but you clearly went full nobrainer on this fight.

Bullshit. That wouldn't end in a tie since he is using the oodama rasengan

excelente fanfic no se si lo continuaras pero aun asi muy buen final y excelente trama, y los personajes fueron bien desarrollados, continua realizando fanfinc de esta manera

You know I have tried , really hard but still can't make any fucking sense to the events in the story.

Sigh mental note don't read 58 chapters with long word counts in a short period of time again. It took me what 2 - 3 days. Anyway I loved this I didn't expect it to be so compelling that I'd read it completely in one go I expected I'd take a week or two off here and there. But this kept pulling me back in any how I'm probably going to read the next one now. I honestly kinda hoped he'd end up in a relationship with blackfire she and he had just as much in common as Raven and him in this story. I'm still for Raven and naruto don't get me wong but wean you had Starfire explain how tamarins love it kinda felt like a flag was raised. So I'm going to go read the next 12 chapters sigh I must be a masochist. Well I should be able to cover 12 by morning unless they are to long.