|Reviews for Tomorrow|
| LittleRed1985 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
It cracks me up that in the author's notes at the end of so many of the one shots you ask if it was sexy. Like you have to ask! Sorry I didn't review Prelude, but I wanted to hurry up and read this one. Both were awesome, just incase you were wondering. Except Prelude seems to be the story of my life, so yeah... lol.
| intensewhatever chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Sheesh woman! How is someone so good at writing lemons? (Take that as a compliment!) :) xD
| christie chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
WOWZA! I loved it! You stayed so true to character. One of my favs.
| madasabrush chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
it did go well with prelude...em...the dinner still isn't on...and I'm heading for the next one. Onward and upward! ;-)
| lionandlamb101 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
you bet your ass it was sexy!
| Celestial's Star chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
i liked it ** more one-shots from u will not be a bad thing. ever.
| SassyBia chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
| Agathons Fan chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
you did really well with this. i definately felt their nervousness slip into a comfort zone with each other. i think they are as much charcter as they could be in this situation.
| brass.petals chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Ah I'm commenting again! haha don't mind me, I just absolutely loved it! I loved how nervous they were but grew comfortable over time. I find it slightly nerve wracking just how willing they are in other stories, when it only makes sense from Bella's personality, and his that they would take it slow at first. So, basically not OOC at all in my books :P
| rearviewxmirrors chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
it was great!
| BloodRedLust chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Yep... totally sexy. :)
I just wrote my first twilight fic last night... i've been writing OTH Naley fics for years, and i'm almost ashamed to admit that until very recently i couldn't find the inspiration to write any couple other than Naley... But then, about a month ago i was introduced to Bella and Edward. I haven't been able to concentrate on Naley since, lol.
I would love for a writer like you to go check out my fic and give me your honest opinion of it. As i said, I'm so used to writing Naley that i don't know if i'm as good at another couple. No pressure, of course, but if you are interested, here's the link.
I'm loving scrolling through your profile reading your fics. You're very good at this :)
| animefan28 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I really liked it! and it was sexy...not that they have to try very hard! lol Anyways good job
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
OH MY GOSH! You are one sexy writer. My husband better watch out tonight. You are going on ALL my favorites list. You can write for me anytime. You go girl. I am going to read ALL your stories. I am off to check out your list. Can't wait to "hear" "read" from you soon. GO WRITE!
| bitemecullen1918 chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
omg that was great i loved it have i mentioned u write the best lemons i have ever read? because well u do and i cant wait for you to come out with another! im so excited please write more soon ive reaf pretty much every single 1 chapter stories now im gonna read the other stories:)
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Oh, this was WONDERFUL! I am so turned-on right now. DO you know how many cold showers you've induced from me? Well, enough to make my mom look at me wierd. LOL.
You did a perfect job. THIS is the stuff I'm talking about. SM could've gone just a BIT further, then pulled out. But no, she didn't. You totally wrote what SM COULD'VE written, but she didn't. And for that, I WORSHIP you. LOL.