|Reviews for Intensity|
| tiCocoChanelle chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
OMG just love; that is amazing!
| FeeltheMusic13 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't let this be a one shot. PLEASE write more. It's cruel to write such an amazing story and leave readers hanging like this. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE with shirtless Elliot on top write more!
| NickandLiv chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
| Brown Eyed Girl chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Please! Write moooore !
| Rodart chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
| Marie2185 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
what a tease that was really hot though please update soon
| bestdamncc chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
i think yu should keep writing on this.
| LoveArt09 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
this story is great please writte another chapter...so realistic its exactly how i love to see elliot and olivia
MORE FROM THIS STORY :)
| brandi chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
The ending of this story completely caught me off guard! I figured they'd get it on, but no, he was only imagining it the whole time! By the time I got to the ending, I was like, "whoa. Did NOT see that coming!" I know this story is a one-shot, but could you please write a one-shot from Olivia's POV? I think it would be interesting to see what she was imagining while she was pinned up against the wall!
Again, awesome fic!
| pinkydog123 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
WHAT? YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY GOOD!
you really know how to describe the word intensity! _
OMG! PLZ CONTINUE!
| electric wannabe chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Damn. That was.. intense lol!
It was too good for words! And so much more believable than all the the fluffy fics too, which sometimes I like to read haha, but this kind of fic is definately more realistic EO.
I love Elliot's little, erm, fantasy/day dream, and then Liv at the end, I can imagine this all in my head! Briliant writing.
| SeriouslyScandalous chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
That really threw me for a loop
I absolutely loved it.
| Elover chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
DUDE that was very nice...had me going... I hope you write some more stories like that
| J0 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Ha-ha. What I really love about this is the way you take the EO shippers almost there, and then snatch it away. EO hooking up would be a disaster, precisely because it would turn into something like this all too often for it to be a healthy relationship. I know that's not why you wrote it, but you show perfectly everything that's wrong with the idea. Heck, he practically rapes her. Bad idea. Great story. Thanks for sharing.
| Elisabeth Carmichael chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Eew, interesting! Didn't see that twist at the end coming! Very good job!