|Reviews for Grieving for Mokuba|
| Yoru No Hoshi chapter 9 . 2/13/2016
Ok... the story is good... the writing needs to flow a bit smoother, but the story is good... only the ships are kind of messed up... Okay I just think shipping Mokie with ANYONE is kind of messed up. As is killing him. I guess I should just stay off the internet, huh.
| How should I feel chapter 9 . 2/26/2014
You made me cry my eyes out, thank you for such a beautiful story, and for letting Mokuba and Joshep pass away together.
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 9 . 8/30/2008
That was so beautiful...it truly was a wonerful work of literature! I was so saddened by both their deaths, but I was also glad as I know they are together always!
God Bless You and Your Family Forever!
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 8 . 8/30/2008
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!
They ... BOTH DIED?
! ! ! ! !
Reading on with a tear...
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 7 . 8/29/2008
OMG! MOKIE! NO!
Reading on with anxiety...
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
If Mokie loves Jou, as I know he does, he would perhaps give up Julliard for Jou...or Jou will resign for Mokie's sake.
THIS IS GETTING TOO GOOD!
MUST READ ON FOR MORE...YOU ROCK AS ALWAYS!
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 5 . 8/29/2008
While I am so glad that Seto already knew and was accepting of it...I now beg the question...what WILL happen if Seto finds out that Mokie found his special someone?
GOTTA READ ON...
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 4 . 8/29/2008
YAY...TEA IS SO ACCEPTING AND ENCOURAGING! YOU GO, GIRL!
Must read on...
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 3 . 8/29/2008
Baby? GREAT! GOOD FOR TEA AND SETO!
I hope Mokie makes the best musical piece ever known to man...just to prove to himself he is wonderfully talented!
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 2 . 8/29/2008
I'm glad that little misunderstanding was resolved.
Jou is being so nice...KAWAII!
I hope Jou makes it back safely as well...
| TheFemalePharaoh chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
I am really sorry for this extreme lateness in my reviews...I had a few issues I had to deal with. Please forgive me, my dearest friend and fellow sister in Christ!
NOW THE REVIEW...
Poor Mokie! He died? Wow...
I am glad that Jou is there in his beginning adult life...
| come back running xx chapter 9 . 8/17/2008
This ending is soo sad, but it is a very wonderful story. I love the way it is written and everything. Great job, and your stories are amazing!
| sherabo chapter 9 . 8/5/2008
Very sad, yet very beautiful. I believe in angles and the fact that people especially children can see them in their innocence which has not been corrupted, smiles. I think in the last lines you lovingly stated that fact.
| Gus Kinney The Prodigal Son chapter 9 . 8/4/2008
that was ... i like the way you did the ending i still don't like
death/romance but i like your storys i hope you make another joey/mokuba untel then bye
| Chillaxes chapter 9 . 8/4/2008
OMG! that was a satisfying ending! I love the name of the kid! Keep up the good work!