Reviews for Full Moon
alexhively815 chapter 2 . 8/8
Fix the grammar to this story as well as the other Naruto stories I've read, do that and these stories will be even better.
ThePokeNerd chapter 1 . 7/11
to mac-man3779 a baby can smile at birth but it's usually more out of reflex than happiness, and smiling is an automatic trait that everyone develops, otherwise blind people wouldn't smile when they are happy but they do. Also babies can sleep through the night whenever but most don't start until at least 3 months, not a year
Mac-man3779 chapter 1 . 7/4
Some technical points to consider: when babies are born they can't smile, their facial muscles aren't developed yet, and smiling is a learned response, it's not a automatic one. Plus, no baby sleeps through the night until their at least a year old.
Esmereilda chapter 32 . 6/16
How cute~ gotta love happy endings
Shisui Uzumaki chapter 12 . 6/15
To be honest both neji and naruto could wipe the floor with tenten
Esmereilda chapter 14 . 6/10
love the norse mythology reference here
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 6/6
why didn't minato just take Naruto an hiraishin to the other side of the village?
Silver566 chapter 5 . 6/6
Going through this again ive noticed than rin and obito arent In this. Probably becuase they werent revealed back when you made this fic
jmcas1121 chapter 12 . 4/13
Jaylo998866 chapter 1 . 4/11
Yugao: omg new baby is born, I need to marry him and have a family. Wtf is wrong with her
Guest chapter 9 . 3/27
Please let Naruto kill Iwa shinobi.
hjhjh chapter 8 . 3/26
If you make Kushina lose the baby i'm done
hjhj chapter 1 . 3/25
Am I the only one creeped out about the 8 year old thinking of marrying a new born baby?
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 3/22
well that sure was fun NaruNeji both won easily Tenten won as well which was cool
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 3/22
well this sure was interesting Now some Naruto/Asuma training should be interesting
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