AWESOME ! Amazing little story ;) Thanks for finishing it of with Edward ;) Thanks for sharing ;D

so glad i found this story! i’m loving it so far, and i can only guess that maybe they were driving out there because william was taking alice to the reservation for protection from the creepy stranger? not sure if this fic has the same canon treaty between the vampires and the wolves as the books, but it would make sense if william knew about the wolves, and that they would protect human alice from a rogue vamp. either way, i’m totally hooked on this and can’t put it down.

""i didn't smell you" but that would have just sounded creepy" is comedy gold
i died reading that

Beautifully written; exciting, original take on Twilight. It is one of my favorites.

This was a great take on the Twilight universe. I'm surprised that there's not more favs/reviews. Thanks for writing. :-)

It's so difficult to find a good story like this. Good is an understatement.. brilliant! Thanks.

so good xc

I don’t know you did that to Rose.

rob and kris are supposed to be Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart right?

This was such a different take on the story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing!

I don't remember who recommended this story, but I am glad I put it down on my to read list. It is such an unusual take of Twilight and I enjoyed it tremendously. Great story!

that was so beautiful! ah thank you so much for sucj a great story! definitely one of my top ten! i'm so glad it was a HEA for everyone!

oh goodness I'm just so happy that Jasper is okay and not dead ahh yes I can't wait to see how this story resolves! The pacing is just absolutely perfect!

Is Jasper gone!? No no no no NO! I want Alice to have a happy ending! aaaaaaahhh 10 chapters left

Your story is so great, just so great! I can't wait to continue reading it. BTW I'm so glad Rose isn't an evil bitch! She's just a normal character and I'm so happy her and Bella are friends. Ahh 12 more chapters to go!