A thoroughly enjoyable story. Thank you for writing. Thank you for leaving this story up so that readers like me can discover it. Best wishes.

Vaya misterio! Gracias!

Me encanta! Gracias

I love a dark take, though this Bella was not what I’d expected

Really enjoying your version so far! It’s fun to guess where it’ll go

Awesome tale. I enjoyed it. Very different from the usual type of story, but enjoyable. Thanks.

Yes this is holding my interest. Its a little different from other Edvard n Bella vampire stories. In a good way.

AWESOME ! Amazing little story ;) Thanks for finishing it of with Edward ;) Thanks for sharing ;D

so glad i found this story! i’m loving it so far, and i can only guess that maybe they were driving out there because william was taking alice to the reservation for protection from the creepy stranger? not sure if this fic has the same canon treaty between the vampires and the wolves as the books, but it would make sense if william knew about the wolves, and that they would protect human alice from a rogue vamp. either way, i’m totally hooked on this and can’t put it down.

""i didn't smell you" but that would have just sounded creepy" is comedy gold
i died reading that

Beautifully written; exciting, original take on Twilight. It is one of my favorites.

This was a great take on the Twilight universe. I'm surprised that there's not more favs/reviews. Thanks for writing. :-)

It's so difficult to find a good story like this. Good is an understatement.. brilliant! Thanks.

so good xc

I don’t know you did that to Rose.