|Reviews for Broken|
| NaTak chapter 12 . 1/4
So, here I am reviewing a fic that has been completed almost 8 years ago... Just wanted to say that I loved it until the end. I loved how you described their relationship, but I didn't like how Ryou so easily forgave Bakura. This fic was intense, it really got to me (I had a dream/nightmare based on this fic last night haha). It was dark, realistic (up until the ending, in my opinion) and extremely addicting. This pairing is a complex one, and really difficult to portrait, but you did an amazing job, you should be proud. If it wasn't for these last chapters it would totally be my favorite BakuraxRyou fic ever!
| SilentGreenThief chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
Yeah, so I perfectly agree with croquant's review. That's pretty much everything I was thinking about this one.
| SilentGreenThief chapter 12 . 1/28/2014
... ... Well, this is certainly one of the darker stories I've read.
| YGOfangirl4ever chapter 12 . 1/18/2013
Wait... so Bakura still hit him when... Ryou,was... willing, to be hit...?
| Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 12 . 8/23/2012
:) loved the story!
| cocobyrd87 chapter 12 . 7/31/2012
Great story! I like this pairing, they fascinate me. Good work!
| Beyond Birthday Loves Jam chapter 12 . 6/15/2011
You made me cry through out this entire story but in the the end I sounded like this:
"Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! I love you two!
You made my day at the end of this story!
| RyouSyki chapter 12 . 5/19/2011
i loved it! sooooo getting added to my favs.
| RyouSyki chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
loving Ryou so far...and its most likly a moral problem, but im lovin Bakuar too ;)
| croquant chapter 12 . 9/6/2010
I adored Ryo's perspecitve from this storyline! You made him strong, and I especially liked how you detailed all his lies (the practice smiling in the mirror) and how you peppered his thoughts with bitterness that he wouldn't say aloud.
In fact, I really enjoyed the story until the middle, when Yami asks Ryo if he would like to go back and he says no. I felt it was entirely too unrealistic for him considering all the torture physically and mentally he was subjected to. I understand his attachment and love to his dark but Ryo would most likely act on his first instincts, which would be to get as far away as possible from his dark. Bakura is much too OOC in the later chapters, it seems implausible that he would become so loving and kind in such a short period of time. A more realistic ending would be to have Ryo agree to Yami and stay with them, but keep bumping into Bakura. Then maybe they end up sleeping together again, and Ryo decides to stay with Bakura despite all the shit he went through.
Solid writing on each chapter, good transitioning and again, I was fascinated by Ryo's perspective here. I hope you continue writing!
| Jaybee4 chapter 12 . 9/1/2010
awwww, how cute. I love non-con stories with a happy ending :3
| echochaos chapter 12 . 7/30/2010
i love the story, but i think you should have focused more on how bakura was changing to fall in love with ryou. all of a sudden he loves him and never hurts him again?
I love the story, don't get me wrong, but i saw my mom in a similar relationship and well... i still love it, it's sweet. uh, i'm putting my foot in my mouth.
i love the story and i'll end the review with that. *favs it*
| xXxAshannahxXx chapter 12 . 3/24/2010
wow. this story is really good. i like how the angst and fluff kinda balance eachother out. in my opinion, the ending was a bit rushed. but i totally understand not being able to write decent endigs. especially with a story as good as this. thanks for sharing :)
| Millenium Love chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I loved it! What else is there to be said? Super hot and Ryou ended up happy which is something that always makes the story that much better in my eyes! :) Well done! 3
| kattastic999 chapter 12 . 10/2/2009
YAY i love it! and I caught that little hint-hint hidden in there. For those of you who didn't find it, look very closely at this:"He has never hit me against my will again." if you still don't see it, then youre hopeless