Reviews for One Night and One Step
TheSwannsSparrow chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I agree with your theory. I like your style
teapirategirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
absolutely lovely and heartbreaking! I loved it...quite possible too. The theory is explored but your take was fresh and graceful.

I loved it...hope to read more of your stories
Nytd chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Lovely little story you've written here. I like the idea of the song being a clue to Jack being the father.

I also like the scene you write between the lines with Jack and Teague.

Very strong ending when Elizabeth decides she regrets the one step. (But clearly not the one night!)

Nicely done.


Florencia7 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Of course it's obvious! The song, the tricorn hat, only Will might have any doubts yet

I loved this: "Still, she bestowed the secret of his parentage to him in song" and this: "But she knew, looking into those familiar eyes; she regretted taking that step past Jack." - Beautifully written.

Wonderful one-shot! :)
Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Loved your short story! Especially this sentence: "But she had known, as soon as she saw her son’s gorgeous dark chocolate eyes, she had known."