|Reviews for One Night and One Step|
| TheSwannsSparrow chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I agree with your theory. I like your style
| teapirategirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
absolutely lovely and heartbreaking! I loved it...quite possible too. The theory is explored but your take was fresh and graceful.
I loved it...hope to read more of your stories
| Nytd chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Lovely little story you've written here. I like the idea of the song being a clue to Jack being the father.
I also like the scene you write between the lines with Jack and Teague.
Very strong ending when Elizabeth decides she regrets the one step. (But clearly not the one night!)
| Florencia7 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Of course it's obvious! The song, the tricorn hat, only Will might have any doubts yet
I loved this: "Still, she bestowed the secret of his parentage to him in song" and this: "But she knew, looking into those familiar eyes; she regretted taking that step past Jack." - Beautifully written.
Wonderful one-shot! :)
| Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Loved your short story! Especially this sentence: "But she had known, as soon as she saw her son’s gorgeous dark chocolate eyes, she had known."