|Reviews for Decision|
| Silverwing chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
You stated that Arya thought that she couldn't marry Eragon. But elves don't marry they mate. Also Eragon said more than "As beautiful as you are, Arya Svit-Kona", try putting the rest in. Thats all the constructive critisism I can give you.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
Another spoiler could be that Arya is a princess. They don't know until Eldest
| Mr Stereo1 chapter 2 . 4/10/2009
FOLLOW UP STORY! I shall now go check your page, if it isn't there I shall be very sad...
| bolkite chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
YeA! oh yea! *gloating* *more gloating*
Note: im really bad at gloating so i just put *gloating*
| bolkite chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
b. Is the spoiler the fairth? Note: I did not read the second chappie yet.
| Hazelstar chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Ouch, that'skinda depressing. Poor Arya.
| Poptarts chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Hi! Me, again. I realy, like realy, realy, realy like it. So sad, so good, It makes me so freaking sad. good job.
| xLilypadsx chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
Im big on the Eragon/Arya ships.
Can't wait to read some of your other stories.
| EverWideningCircles chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
This is really good. I could picture this actually happening in one of the books. Most Eragon/Arya fics aren't as believable. Good job!
| Togira Ikonka chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
This was pretty good! I liked it!
| I AM MAYBE GOD chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
yeah realy good i think you should rite some more
| Riley chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
u should do a follow up on "the rest of arya's life" and why she would regret that decision more and more
| pippermint chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Darn it, I don't remember the books that well.
In this, Eragon seems overdramatic and Arya seems... just OOC, if I'm not mistaken. Wasn't she kind of reserved in the trilogy? -shrugs- Your story isn't badly written, I just wish the characterization and detail had been stronger.