Reviews for Overflow
Sonorous Serendipity chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
i really have to hand it to you.. to ACTUALLY be able to accurately write in l's pov. :D

great story!
kamimimi chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Nyuuuuuu! Curse you! D'8 I shall never know what happens next... -weeps-
But yah, that was fun 8U

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Sallafe K chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Homigosh, that was amazing! xD

I love the way you wrote L; that was exactly how I picture him approaching a relationship. It was both totally amusing and completely adorable at the same time. ;)

Instant fave!
littleann84 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
OH. MY. GOD.

You are AMAZING! I could never, in a million years, write L's POV this well. This is absolutly brilliant! All the calculations and his innocent understanding of emotions is spot on.

And the ending was so sweet!

Great job _
cake.and.tea chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I loved the whole deduction thing going on in L's mind. Absolutely awesome D
EmoLemonz chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I love it, I really do...

I mean, I'm not really a big fan of LightxL or LxLight, but i love this!

Keep writing-EmoLemonz
Sailor Sunset chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
No kissing... no lemons...

Strangely though, I lurve this!

It's so awesome. I think it would describe Ryuzaki's type of thinking perfectly. He's a logical person, after all.
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
: D

I got bored and decided to see what else you wrote. I dunno why I didn't read it before.

This was really entertaining, I like how surprised he is that Light doesn't follow his expectations. They are so cute together. x3

Now then, when will you put up that long-awaited side story! D:
sunamikei chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Ahh! Good ending, but I hate it! XD

Um, how about writing a sequel... please? :D

It's a good story, I like all those thoughts in % :)
WRen chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Cute

Well, that cheered me up no end.

Perfectly in-character. I do love the idea of L thinking in percentages.

Write more. Please? :)
CloudyReflections chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
This story is so utterly cute I think I was about to get up and dance. Siriusly. Anyway, I love how you make L think in percents, and you're definitely much better at writing as L in first person than I am.
khawarspirit chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
"One may describe it as butterflies inside my stomach, even though that is perfectly impossible unless I were to have eaten them, which I know for a fact I have not done."

I lol'd. That was SO completely L. You did an excellent job with the characters, and the math was good.

You have to write more or I'll attack you. ;D
papercut ai chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
this is excellently done! ]

i'm glad somebody has gotten it right, the pairing and characterization that is.

i'd love to see you do more of it. ;)
red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
NOZ! Kiss kiss kiss!

XD

great one-shot. I was literally leaning forward in my chair.

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laynsmagicbox chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow. That...that was so...it could have been L thinking that. It's...wonderful!
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