Loved. It truly

You really need to run spell check on this story.

I really get annoyed when people say that if you bulky muscles that you can't be fast or a ninja it's stupid I mean look at A the Yondaime Raikage he's a god damn tank yet his speed is only bested by Minato with Hirashin and Naruto in his tailed beast mode I mean come on really stop bitchin about bulky muscles it's stupid.

Great story, hope theres a sequel..

This story needs a beta. There's bad grammar all over the place, redundancies, and misused words everywhere.

Loved the story really good way of ending it I think I'm going to read all your story's now hehe

dear god i never realized how bad this grammar was when i read it years ago

reason i hate rereading good stories is cause when i come back and look...you realize how bad they are .

lol naruto's thoughts sound like a caveman's

your the Most consistent 1000 Favorited story author ever

Hello, i people are sill complaining about a sequal series. Is there a way to email him?

Good story however theres no sequel and you left so many damn cliffhangers what about Madara and Zetsu, the voice in Sasukes head, Kakazu gone, and my personal favorite Naruto and Ankos future does he get married do they have kids what that was a dick move leaving us all hanging with no sequel anyway good story 8 out of ten till next time ja ne

Ok two problems one Narutos twin sword style is imposible katanas are pure two handed weapons you can't use them with one hand and you certainly can't dual wield with one if you had to ninjatos then yes that would be perfect because they're the same size and shape a katana is a long and curved sword where as a ninjato is straight and on the short size so your style is impossible the second problem is this new ice maiden is not the resistance leader that's Mei so I don't know where you got that from I do however hope Anko gets pregnant soon that would be wonderful anyway chow

I wonder if the auther should be emailed to see about this sequal series people want. If he is doen with this one, why would he read the reviews. Espesialy if he has bean done with this one for a long period of time.

I have finised, is there a sequal series to continue? If so where is it?