Reviews for Tired
cody chapter 28 . 4/8
Loved. It truly
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7
You really need to run spell check on this story.
Zeran X chapter 12 . 3/2
I really get annoyed when people say that if you bulky muscles that you can't be fast or a ninja it's stupid I mean look at A the Yondaime Raikage he's a god damn tank yet his speed is only bested by Minato with Hirashin and Naruto in his tailed beast mode I mean come on really stop bitchin about bulky muscles it's stupid.
Afi chapter 28 . 2/13
Great story, hope theres a sequel..
Anaea chapter 2 . 1/12
This story needs a beta. There's bad grammar all over the place, redundancies, and misused words everywhere.
silverback95 chapter 28 . 1/11
Loved the story really good way of ending it I think I'm going to read all your story's now hehe
diamondace4 chapter 2 . 1/7
dear god i never realized how bad this grammar was when i read it years ago
diamondace4 chapter 1 . 1/7
reason i hate rereading good stories is cause when i come back and look...you realize how bad they are .
dragonfighter11 chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
lol naruto's thoughts sound like a caveman's
AceMaximum chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
your the Most consistent 1000 Favorited story author ever
averell torrent chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Hello, i people are sill complaining about a sequal series. Is there a way to email him?
Zeran X chapter 28 . 11/5/2013
Good story however theres no sequel and you left so many damn cliffhangers what about Madara and Zetsu, the voice in Sasukes head, Kakazu gone, and my personal favorite Naruto and Ankos future does he get married do they have kids what that was a dick move leaving us all hanging with no sequel anyway good story 8 out of ten till next time ja ne
Zeran X chapter 21 . 11/5/2013
Ok two problems one Narutos twin sword style is imposible katanas are pure two handed weapons you can't use them with one hand and you certainly can't dual wield with one if you had to ninjatos then yes that would be perfect because they're the same size and shape a katana is a long and curved sword where as a ninjato is straight and on the short size so your style is impossible the second problem is this new ice maiden is not the resistance leader that's Mei so I don't know where you got that from I do however hope Anko gets pregnant soon that would be wonderful anyway chow
averell torrent chapter 26 . 11/3/2013
I wonder if the auther should be emailed to see about this sequal series people want. If he is doen with this one, why would he read the reviews. Espesialy if he has bean done with this one for a long period of time.
ender wiggn chapter 28 . 10/30/2013
I have finised, is there a sequal series to continue? If so where is it?
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