Formatting sucks. Story sucks. You suck and you're too much of a fucktard to swallow like a good bitch should. Fuck off and die.

mind your business Tenten. If you didn't want him with an older woman then you should have taken him yourself.

Couldn't past 2two chapter.

It's bad for all of the reasons people are saying lol. Couldn't make it past chapter three. The horribly boring conversations, Naruto becoming more emo than Sasuke, Naruto getting ridiculously strong in two weeks, bad grammar, the fact that it was literally his fault that the mission failed, etc, etc. If Naruto always had the ability to get so strong with barely any training and no sensei, why didn't he just do it while Jiraiya was ignoring him? It sounds like Jiraiya actually taught him quite well considering he could just use the kyuubi chakra AND was a godlike sensor type for some reason. Also, Kakashi told Sakura she didn't do anything either, but then also said Naruto knocked her unconscious. Like yeah she didn't do anything, she was fucking asleep because of your bitchy student. Anyways, yeah. I pointed out all of that shit, and I stopped after chapter three. I really don't recommend.

Awesome cliffhanger ending

Best sword based Naruto story!

Theif Lupin hell yeah fuck sakura lol

My guy sakura called you knucklehead and suddenly that was your last straw?

Hopefully you come back to this fire fanfiction you started cooking with these S rank fights

shizune was so fucking annoying in that scene
fucking dyke

Always knew Yamato was a faggot

bro 3rd hokage could use and mastered all 5 natured

Why has nobody taught him sage mode

Dude he changed we get it move on.

Dude he changed we get it move on.