Reviews for Tired
Guest chapter 2 . 1/28
Couldn't past 2two chapter.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/27
It's bad for all of the reasons people are saying lol. Couldn't make it past chapter three. The horribly boring conversations, Naruto becoming more emo than Sasuke, Naruto getting ridiculously strong in two weeks, bad grammar, the fact that it was literally his fault that the mission failed, etc, etc. If Naruto always had the ability to get so strong with barely any training and no sensei, why didn't he just do it while Jiraiya was ignoring him? It sounds like Jiraiya actually taught him quite well considering he could just use the kyuubi chakra AND was a godlike sensor type for some reason. Also, Kakashi told Sakura she didn't do anything either, but then also said Naruto knocked her unconscious. Like yeah she didn't do anything, she was fucking asleep because of your bitchy student. Anyways, yeah. I pointed out all of that shit, and I stopped after chapter three. I really don't recommend.
wolfpackgigglesback chapter 28 . 12/21/2023
Awesome cliffhanger ending
wolfpackgigglesback chapter 25 . 12/21/2023
Best sword based Naruto story!
Morisu3 chapter 1 . 12/11/2023
Theif Lupin hell yeah fuck sakura lol
Tinker Infestation chapter 1 . 7/26/2023
My guy sakura called you knucklehead and suddenly that was your last straw?
Guest chapter 28 . 7/22/2023
Hopefully you come back to this fire fanfiction you started cooking with these S rank fights
Cain Dubois chapter 2 . 7/19/2023
shizune was so fucking annoying in that scene
fucking dyke
Cain Dubois chapter 1 . 7/19/2023
Always knew Yamato was a faggot
football78 chapter 13 . 7/10/2023
bro 3rd hokage could use and mastered all 5 natured
football78 chapter 13 . 7/10/2023
Why has nobody taught him sage mode
dextrio chapter 3 . 4/18/2023
Dude he changed we get it move on.
dextrio chapter 3 . 4/18/2023
Dude he changed we get it move on.
musadak.khalid chapter 4 . 4/17/2023
You made him a pussy !
Ryu Tekeshi chapter 12 . 1/19/2023
I know you out those two in your book and I want the first copy hahahahahah
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