Reviews for Tired
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Don't write again please.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
dafaq? Introduction could have been better and I'm hoping your not bashing Naruto fnafics have a thing for bashing people especially Sakura who really was just introduced badly improvement AS well as growth from fangirl wasn't explained possibly giving people a positive outlook on Sakura
Kyoya hatake chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
Your grammar is horrible . ...
Wolfone10 chapter 9 . 10/16/2015
Lets take a quick look at team 7... Sasuke lost to Haku, almost committed suicide when facing zabuza, lost to the snow guy's bodyguards, lost to the rajin sword, lost to orochimaru, lost to garaa, it's no wonder that no uchiha have ever been hokage, all they seem to be good at is LOSING! I mean come on, sasuke was present at snow and wave.. Yet it's Naruto that got a bridge named after him and got a diaymo to love him, sasuke might as well noit even been present! Konoha is the ONLY place that gives two shits about the shit stain! Nobody else on the PLANET gives a crap about that worthless DEAD clan. Seriously what kinda clan gets wiped out by a TEENAGER(who is dying and going blind) in one night? That's just pathetic!
Raikaguken chapter 24 . 9/10/2015
ooh the blanks have been filled quite good and it will put even Jiraiya to shame
Raikaguken chapter 7 . 9/9/2015
raikage did'nt get sleep from them
bigfan22 chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
After reading your later works, it's obvious you were just getting your feet wet as a writer with this one. Overall it wasn't a bad story, it just wasn't as well written as the other fics I have read from you.
Eltari chapter 2 . 8/23/2015
You've probably heard this many times before in previous reviews but I'm just going to say it again your grammar really fucking SUCKS. I would like to continue reading this story, I really would, but trying to read something that looks like it was written by a ten year old tends to give me a head ache. If English isn't your first language then you have a valid excuse.
spiritwolf35 chapter 4 . 8/14/2015
So far the story is ok other than the grammar sucks big time but still ok that and there is no way in HELL Naruto would be able to learn all that in only 2 weeks heck in canon it took him more than 2 to 3 days just to cut the leaf and that is with him using hundreds and hundreds of clones and the same goes to cutting the waterfall and I dont care if you have it where he has high chakra control but oh well
spiritwolf35 chapter 2 . 8/12/2015
I read this story before but never finished it I do know you left the story wide open at the end and I do remember you telling me a few years ago that you were planning to make a sequel to this story I mean the Akatsuki is still out there and if I remember right Tobi going to free Sasuke from his cell so like I said you left the story wide open for a sequel
superthunder2523 chapter 28 . 8/1/2015
This fiction was a masterpiece. I never got bored even in a single chapter. I normally like powerful naruto stories but people make them too powerful almost god-like with no challenge what so ever. Your Naruto was very powerful but it didnt felt like it was unearned and battles were very well described. Ill be sure to check some of your other fictions. Thanks for publishing this.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
Wow. I like the idea of the story, but there are too many grammer mistakes and missing words. It looks horrid.
OpusPacem chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
I hope u realize that naruto is a ninja so it's a good thing to be underestimated that way he won't get killed.
Shaydrall chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Interesting idea, but you definitely need a Beta to go over all of this. Too many errors to ignore, and from other reviews I've read, things don't really improve. Find that Beta
Knight'sShade chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
I like the story, but unless sakra and ino are dating, lay off the chan in their conversations. it just gets annoying for 2 freinds to refer to each other like their in love.
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