Reviews for Tired
BingeReader97 chapter 2 . 12/23/2016
I tried to give this a chance, I really did. But I just can't handle the terrible spelling and sentence structuring. I loved the idea and pairing you have picked out but I simply can't understand what's going on half of the time.
CosmicPanda chapter 4 . 10/5/2016
whoa, this chapter was a hot mess in terms of typing, you did NOT check your work did you?
Keechinator chapter 28 . 9/29/2016
this coming with a sequel? the end kinda sets up one
Rafail462 chapter 3 . 9/23/2016
Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2016
Oh yeah time heals all wounds so naruto comes waltzing back to Sakura my fucking God, I want to train alone so why don't I tell everyone why I'm sick of you and then be surprised when more people try and convince you otherwise the author of this clearly missed making anything good of this by making naruto determined but still a complete shithead
brebre99 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
I really enjoyed this
MyAnimeFreedom chapter 6 . 8/5/2016
Naruto is becoming(became) overpowered... I'm okay with this.

The fights are boring ... I hope they get better.

The plot... not sure what it is...
The Grand Reaper chapter 28 . 7/25/2016
Lisanna Ackerman chapter 6 . 6/5/2016
Ano,isn't Kakashi supposed to be Naruto's surrogate nii-san because ototou indicates that Kakashi is younger to Naruto..
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Ok,how the hell would the mission go, if Naruto didn't go Kyubi? , Oh, I know, Orochimaru would kill them all if he wanted.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/2/2016
justin.jossart chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Dude. Grammar check. The idea is good, but please either get a beta or at least a grammar check program.
Firefly9202002 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Sai would know about Kyubi because Danzo doesn't care about the would have informed Sai.
ZoomStraightToTheMoon chapter 3 . 2/3/2016
I like what you have written so far, but you need to invest in a beta. The grammar mistakes are plentiful.
creativesm75 chapter 28 . 1/19/2016
well... Sasuke is an idiot. Naruto is awesome and your fanfic is good
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