I hope u realize that naruto is a ninja so it's a good thing to be underestimated that way he won't get killed.

Interesting idea, but you definitely need a Beta to go over all of this. Too many errors to ignore, and from other reviews I've read, things don't really improve. Find that Beta

I like the story, but unless sakra and ino are dating, lay off the chan in their conversations. it just gets annoying for 2 freinds to refer to each other like their in love.

Don't judge the book by its cover...

Summary looked nice and the idea of the story also nice.. But that grammar... I'm sorry but I can't help but cringe at the abundance of errors and missing letters, and thats just from the 1st Chapter... If your reading this please either fix your grammar or get a beta...

P.S. I ain't joking when I said cringe ~_~

I loved this story, it was brilliant
Although I'm looking for the sequel aha

Kakashi got the left sharingan, not the right.

You really need Beta-reader.

why is naruto suddenly intellectual? he did no actual training with Jaraiya and I know for a fact that mood changes don't make you an intellectual genius and strategist off the bat.

Is there going to be a sequel?

I'd hate my father if I was Naruto. Family to me is more important then a bunch of nameless people in the village. So yeah. I'd use Minato's jutsus but would never call him my father.

Good story but I feel Naruto is gaining far too much strength WAY too quickly.

So many reviewers commenting in chapter two. I won't even read that far is this is the quality of writing the author shows in his prologue.

how does aoi know about naruto being a jinchuuiki? i dont think that they would just tell him a s-class secret.

isnt gamakichi the one that naruto normaly summons?

thank you for making an attempt to write a story but it is just too clunky to read. perhaps in future you may want a beta as I am guessing English is not your first language.