I finally finished another of your stories and I must say, I am pretty impressed. This was your first story? Although I still wonder about that other story of yours Full Moon since you still have Orochimaru, Kabuto, and the rest of Otogakure who are still alive.

I enjoyed this story quiet a bit, ill be waiting for the sequel

Frankly I think Suiton suits Hinata who maneuver's with a fluidity similiar to water. Katon suits Kiba as he seems to be short tempered, as for Shino if his Kikaichu beetles could harness Raiton chakra from their nest(Shino) they could easily shock their target allowing them to feast upon said victims chakra.

"With all due respect to all people here in this office, if you look at me with such eyes again, I'll literally bit the crap of all of you"

Wow, what garbled syntax. You just wrote that Naruto would bite their crap LOL. I think you meant to write that he would *beat the crap out of all of you*.

Already on chapter 4 when does anko come in?

Feh. Naruto has been shown to make hundreds of clones in both the manga and anime. Yet he gets tired after making 19 and can barely make a 20th here? Really? I find that a bit hard to swallow.

number 8 would actually be Ninja Art(or more specifically Water Release) Hidden Mist jutsu

I have to say that this story has been a great one and seeing as there will be a sequel to this story continuing it, I feel that you have a great story line here and when its continued, it'll be even bigger! Excellent work on this story! I look forward to reading more of your stories.

This was good, though, you really left several loose ends. And I do mean several. Naruto's second nature chakra is Suiton, right, you didn't have him use it but maybe once, and his Assassin Stare, you completely left it out after three or six chapters later. Like I said, loose ends that left me (the reader) questioning.
It was still good, but not like your other stories. And you left this to have a sequel, but there is none. You did good though for a first fanfic.

Um...I thought Naruto had Suiton as a second affinity. Why hadn't he focused much of it in battle as he does with Doton in others?

overall this was a good story but really hard to read. i think it would be good to do a revision.

Ok that was a great story it took me a wekk to read it and it was a good week. I have enjoyed every second of this story. I am very impressed.
Draco122

this is the most stupid story ive ever read

It may not be a doujutsu, but if he can teach other people to do similiar it could be a clan Doujutsu, like the Hyuga clan's Jyuken being the Hyuga style taijutsu, this technique could be called the Demon's Eye of terror. I assume Demon Eye would be Onigan but w/e.

Long assed chapter, took me an hour and a half to read it. But despite the length it was awesome need to memorize some of those jutsu since they can be quite useful in the future.