Reviews for Tired |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was a pretty cool fight surprised Four Eyes loser gave up so easily, nice battles though for Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was interesting Pedomaru really hates Naruto lol, Sasgay's realised that Naruto's just better than him, Naruto was able to get a new sword, new summons and beat Kiba and now will face Yugao I can't wait for that fight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, damn almost forgot about this story, Nice lemon also, and haha Sasgay got his ass handed to him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why isn’t he learning his fathers jutsu?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor grammer |
![]() ![]() tf happen to gamatatsu sounds more like gamakichi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow who need 3 years when you can be strong in two weeks with just books and no sensei... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuando sacarlas la segunda temporada? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story so far is good but have he stupidest conversations. There is nothing interesting about the conversation between characters in this story. |
![]() ![]() teach him hirashin and senjutsu |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLSSS continue it |
![]() ![]() Did you just say the colour of your blouse?! WTF MOTHERFUCKER ARE MAD?! HOW TF DO YOU FUCKING MISTAKE A SHIRT OR JACKET FOR A MOTHERFUVKING BLOUSE?! BLOUSE! ARE YOU SMOKIN DUDE? FUCKING IDIOT. LAMEASS. COMPLETE LAME MOTHER FUCKER. HOPE YOU DIE CHOKING ON YOU OWN CUM BITCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always thought that Sarutobi should have raised Naruto with his family, he was the Hokage and the God of Shinobi he should have protected the child of the Yondaime who died protecting all of Konoha, not to mention that Naruto was the last of the Uzumaki in Konoha after they failed to help Uzushiogakure. Also as a young Jinchūriki he would have been more protected, he would not have even been the only ruler of a hidden village that had that close of ties to their Jinchūriki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if he were still a 'knucklehead' looking that much like his dad he should of been told so it doesn't catch him off guard at the worst time or can't be used against him. |
![]() ![]() Awesome story, I really hope you write the sequel some time. Thanks for sharing, it was great reading this story again after so long. |