Reviews for Tired
SomewhatDark chapter 4 . 7/1/2020
Dude learning a jutsu here is like drinking water and Naruto went from genin to mid jonin in two weeks without the kagebunshin? *sigh* like many fics a good idea with a bad execution. Still its a good read.
12Ookami12 chapter 28 . 6/13/2020
I just finished this one and I gotta sat it is disappointing that we never got a sequel

this is a well layed plot for the fic that stuck to what it was meant ti be not like others that start and then deviate

I really recommend this fic to any naruto fic readers
mun2813 chapter 7 . 5/29/2020
awesome book
Guest chapter 2 . 5/25/2020
You need to work on your English man.
roberthayden895 chapter 7 . 4/6/2020
I dont usually comment, but boy this story is bad. first it's all 'woe is me' at the same time as powering up naruto instantly without explanation of how over the 2 weeks. then everything just happens way too easily. finally after having naruto boast perfect control and much larger capacity he tries at the same time as kakashi... had to stop reading

oh and the grammer... nuff said
spiritwolf35 chapter 28 . 4/3/2020
nice story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Your English skills are toxic enough to bring down a blue whale with a single drop of the radioactive waste
silversnitch4765 chapter 11 . 3/27/2020
I call bs on his assassin mode taking over, he said b4 he activated it that he was going to kill him.
silversnitch4765 chapter 6 . 3/27/2020
Naruto’s chakra control is in your story is 1000% better, when he was 12 with no chakra control he can make hundreds of clones. Why did 20 clones exhaust him? It goes against everything you have been writing previous.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Says the man whos training a kid who resorts to the sharingan often okay
Brandon Boodoo chapter 4 . 9/17/2019
This story seems like it was written and thought out by a 5 year old. The ideas aren't bad but the writing and build of the story seems like it's not enough to be considered anything but a children's book.
umaiwe chapter 17 . 9/8/2019
Normally I wouldn't have reacted towards OC villains, but this Satoshi Hino certainly caught me off guard due to the real person whose name above is voice acted as Sai in original series lol
look2019 chapter 28 . 8/23/2019
Good Chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
I liked the idea for this story but you clearly have a tenuous grasp of the English language. A lot of your story technically makes no sense. You leave out words and add ones that aren’t needed, switch between tenses and have generally poor spelling and grammar. If you want people to enjoy your writing I would seriously suggest you take English lessons.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2019
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