Reviews for Hair Trigger
zakkieman chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
i think this is a very interesting and unique idea i wish you could try to make more with it but sadly its just a one-shot but good job
Cesar chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Just beautiful just beautiful
Thank you for the story. I am crying. Thank you.
wintermoonlight chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
You, demonicnargles, are one cool author xD
i've read your other stories of naruino and all of them impressed me
you know how to move the emotions of readers so well that i was almost tempted to say that you played with my emotions xD
well you get the point
i hope i can read more of you works soon
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Hmm. Well, its an idea. Not much else...
icefireSpirit Wolf chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
this was very good i liked this very much, one of two things you could do is that i was having trouble diserning past stuff from present if you could make things less jumpy and stuff it would be good, but other then that i loved it!
DuQaine chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Really good :D It's funny how Naruto's Hulk-like in getting pissed haha. I enjoyed reading your story. Pretty fresh idea and I loved how you executed it. Nice.
Oshu chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
That was so good it was good

does that make since?

No? that's fine I don't usally don't make sense anyway?

Yes? that's great! I am sorta disappointed though someone figured me out...

no I have to wipe your memory and I will do it!

10/10
Sdarian chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Neat. I would have liked to have seen this played out into a larger story though.
kiwi4me chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
omg!

wow sad but i like it!

good work. :]
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I like it. It does appear that the people close to Naruto are the only ones he turns even slightly Kyuubi for (minus the Neji/Naru fight in the Chuunin Exams).
jere7782 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
i thought it was pretty good!
Tsavorite Garnet chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Excellent.
Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Interesting.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Well done

Itachi's aprentice
grey mage chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
good story. but your usage of time skips is something to be desired.
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