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tommi chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
wow. i don't quite get how everything fits together. please make the connections more clear in your next fanfiction. other than that, it was really good. i almost cried reading this story. i'm not just saying that for your benifit.
carino2 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Wow. That was really really powerful.

"you needed wanted more"

But that either needs some sort of separation or a word removed, I think.

"nicest-guy-on-earth-wish-he-was-my-father-turned-traitorous-scheming-manipulative-dirtbag"

Jeb. I cried.

This was a beautiful piece, and I loved how Nudge found a place to belong in her religion. I'd never even thought of that before, but you did it beautifully. Great job.
Pray for me. Pray chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Nice...I don't get the title, but I liked the overall content in this fic. But ain't Erasers now Flyboys?