|Reviews for Absence|
| mermaid12108 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I love it! I wish there was more :( *Hint, Hint*
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
nice change from the book
| Separate Entity chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Hello, my name is Separate Entity and I have a cast of fictional characters from assorted locations running amok both in and out of my head. No, I am not crazy, but imaginary Carlisle HAS tried to diagnose me with imaginary schizophrenia. I have tried (and so have imaginary Abby and imaginary Esme) to convince him otherwise, but it doesn't work. At least, it didn't until I pointed out that I COULDN'T think they were real, why would I go out of my way to say they were imaginary?
This is VERY good.
HEY, WHAT ABOUT ME?
*Shut up, imaginary Abby!*
By the way, ROLL CALL!
I'd like to introduce you to the cast here at Separate Entity Incorporated:
I would also like to introduce you to *takes deep breath* Imaginary Carlisle?
I'm right here.
Shh! I'm MEDITATING!
Can I get back to doing my hair now?
I'M NOT HERE!
*Imaginary Nico wakes up* Huh? Hey, what's every imaginary body doing here?
Present and accounted for.
I am here.
I hate roll calls.
Umm... Excuse me.
OOH, OOH, is this going to be in a review? I've always wanted to be in one of those things. Is it? Is it? Is it?
I am here.
Hello? Are you there?
Okay, we are missing imaginary McGee. I repeat we are missing-
HEY, WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE MY TURN?
One imaginary Abby, present and accounted for.
And many imaginary others.
Random Saying For The Chapter: When life gives you lemons, make grape juice and sit around listening to people ask you how you did it.
| MJ chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
I love Ian too! and do u happen to like Jacob as well?
| Anon chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
The thing is, Wanda never actually left. They put her into a cryotank. Also, Wanda never became Petals Open to the Moon. She was another soul who Doc removed from the host body in order to put Wanda into it. I like the idea of telling Ian's side of it and have imagined it myself. With the exception of the little plot holes, the story was fairly well written.
| Spunkalovely chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Haha, 'grab her now' I liked that one. Good fic!
| Sakiru Yume chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
It was pretty good. It kind of confused me, so try to work on being a little clearer, but otherwise it was good.
| Frozen Archer chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Umm. Sorry but I'm just a little confused right now, actually a lot. About whether you're going by what was said in the book or your own idea of how it should of happened? It's really well written, I only saw a couple spelling/grammar mistakes.