Reviews for Absence
mermaid12108 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I love it! I wish there was more :( *Hint, Hint*
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
nice change from the book
Separate Entity chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Hello, my name is Separate Entity and I have a cast of fictional characters from assorted locations running amok both in and out of my head. No, I am not crazy, but imaginary Carlisle HAS tried to diagnose me with imaginary schizophrenia. I have tried (and so have imaginary Abby and imaginary Esme) to convince him otherwise, but it doesn't work. At least, it didn't until I pointed out that I COULDN'T think they were real, why would I go out of my way to say they were imaginary?

This is VERY good.

HEY, WHAT ABOUT ME?

*Shut up, imaginary Abby!*

By the way, ROLL CALL!

I'd like to introduce you to the cast here at Separate Entity Incorporated:

Me?

Check!

Myself?

Speaking.

I?

Present.

Moi?

Here.

Yours Truly?

Here.

I would also like to introduce you to *takes deep breath* Imaginary Carlisle?

Present.

Imaginary Esme?

I'm right here.

Imaginary Alice?

HI!

Imaginary Bella?

Here.

Imaginary Jasper?

Shh! I'm MEDITATING!

Imaginary Edward?

Present.

Imaginary Rosalie?

Can I get back to doing my hair now?

Imaginary Emmett?

I'M NOT HERE!

Imaginary Renesmee?

What?

Imaginary Jacob?

Yo.

Imaginary Grover?

APPLES!

Imaginary Nico?

*Imaginary Nico wakes up* Huh? Hey, what's every imaginary body doing here?

Imaginary Thalia?

Hi.

Imaginary Percy?

Here.

Imaginary Annabeth?

Present and accounted for.

Imaginary Tyson?

I am here.

Imaginary Max?

Here.

Imaginary Fang?

I hate roll calls.

Imaginary Jeb?

Present.

Imaginary Ari?

What?

Imaginary Angel?

I'm here.

Imaginary Gasman?

Umm... Excuse me.

Imaginary Iggy?

Yes?

Imaginary Nudge?

OOH, OOH, is this going to be in a review? I've always wanted to be in one of those things. Is it? Is it? Is it?

Imaginary Lissa?

Here.

Imaginary Rose?

Here.

Imaginary Adrian?

Check.

Imaginary Christian?

Here.

Imaginary Dimitri?

Here.

Imaginary Ziva?

I am here.

Imaginary Tony?

CHECK!

Imaginary Gibbs?

Mm-hm?

Imaginary McGee?

Imaginary McGee?

Hello? Are you there?

Okay, we are missing imaginary McGee. I repeat we are missing-

HEY, WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE MY TURN?

One imaginary Abby, present and accounted for.

And many imaginary others.

Random Saying For The Chapter: When life gives you lemons, make grape juice and sit around listening to people ask you how you did it.
MJ chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
I love Ian too! and do u happen to like Jacob as well?
Anon chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
The thing is, Wanda never actually left. They put her into a cryotank. Also, Wanda never became Petals Open to the Moon. She was another soul who Doc removed from the host body in order to put Wanda into it. I like the idea of telling Ian's side of it and have imagined it myself. With the exception of the little plot holes, the story was fairly well written.
Spunkalovely chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Haha, 'grab her now' I liked that one. Good fic!
Sakiru Yume chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
It was pretty good. It kind of confused me, so try to work on being a little clearer, but otherwise it was good.
Frozen Archer chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Umm. Sorry but I'm just a little confused right now, actually a lot. About whether you're going by what was said in the book or your own idea of how it should of happened? It's really well written, I only saw a couple spelling/grammar mistakes.