|Reviews for Deadweight|
| MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I love your style of writing; the description is so un-Stephenie Meyer as Bella-esque that it makes for a perfect Edward. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Cheers
| Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I like how you twisted the prompt around; my first thought was actually a shower (with Edward *mind out of gutter mind out of gutter*), but I like how you made it fit with rain and the music Edward relaxes to in his head. I like reading things from Edward's POV because we get to see how he views situations that we've seen from Bella's POV numerous amount of times. Looking forward to more! :D
(When can I pick up Edward for our date? I have some things in mind to drive him crazy that my mother would not approve of...but it's Edward, so she might understand) :P
| Aiedail01 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Wow, that was beautifully written. Your descriptions are amazing, especially that second paragraph.
| mybrandofheroin1 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
i love it.
| siriuslycoco chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
why are you so amazing at writing? I loved the way you wrote what's going through Edward's mind! it captures him so well! great job as always! siriuslycoco :)
| peachpaige chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
LOVE it! Great job! I love the insight into Edward's mind - b/c don't we all want Midnight Sun out already?
| anokasdoll chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Wow, great story. I think it's one of the bests stories I've read regarding his control. And I loved the whole rain thing. ) Too bad it's a one-shot.
| Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
wow. Really interesting perspective on Edward...well done. )
| AmazingBouncingFerret445 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
a dream come true! YOU writing about EDWARD. im about to pass out from happiness!
i love it love it! LOVE it! i dont think i can properly express my enthusiasm here... just know i love it :)
| RandomPerson23456 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
WoW! That was really good! You are a great writer!
| fireblazie chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
AH! Not only does she write brilliant Remus/Tonks fic, but she also writes amazing Edward/Bella fic!
You write beautifully, you know? It's all in the descriptions, I think. Usually too much description and not a lot of dialogue turns me off, but for some reason, I couldn't stop reading! It's nice to get a glimpse into Edward's mind - monster vs. man and whatnot. And I like that he was composing another song for Bella. I wish a guy would write me a lullaby. XP
| Shadow-ofthe-Night35 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Oh, Jesus, that was brilliant. You have a great way of capturing emotion on paper-or in cyber space as the case may be. This is beautifully done, and the images rendered from the rain, the orchestral references, and everything the Edward thinks/is are so picturesque and perfect. Thank you.
| LVB chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I'll take date the date with Edwards thanks ;)
Lovely story! I must say I am quite happy that you have snuck into the world of Twilight fanfic :)
| miss-blanche chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
When I saw the words Lady Bracknell and Twilight I screamed and dropped my cup of tea on the carpet.
I FREAKING LOVED THIS! ARGH! I feel like I've read it before but I can't rightly remember... I'm probably just demented. But this is so awesome!
| toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Ooh I loved the descriptions - and everything! - in this! Just perfectly BRILLIANT, and AWESOME. :D