Reviews for Life goes on
TheVictoriousMC chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
Aww...the fluff

I was about to flip out if it was all just a dream. Haha, glad it wasn't.
Sumiregawa Nenene chapter 5 . 8/27/2009
Oh wow. That was utterly adorable. And gosh, Suzuka and Arisa to top it off... I applaud you daring to use the less popular characters, and to top it off to successfully weave in believable OCs that didn't ruin the story at all. They did exactly as you said: they helped the story along.

Thank you so much for the great read.
FuryouMiko chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
A Favourite doesn't mean much from me (I need to clear out my favourites, THEN it'll mean something, ehe), but this story was great. Very cute, and just so... normal. It's nice to escape the hyper-powered mechaness of regular Nanoha.

Was the complete lack of mention of the main cast intentional? As it was, it made a nice jab at the fact that Nanoha's two best friends from childhood were never mentioned again! If I'd been writing it, I probably would have mentioned Nanoha's abandonment of them when Arisa was agonising in chapter 4. It probably would have distracted from the core plot and concept, though, so if it was intentional - good choice!
Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
Cute. Good job! I really like this story.
Belthasar chapter 5 . 10/7/2008
Well, this was a nice story. I'm going to have to look out for whatever you write in the future.
Elestren chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
I really enjoyed that. Suzuka and Arisa really do need to be touched on more. They amuse me incredibly. Good story too, how it was simply later on in life. As stated, "Life goes on." D
SakuBloss chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
Great story. Loved it. It was very well-written )
con2020tran chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
Having friends stand by you really makes all the difference, doesn't it?

Loved the confession scene to bits and pieces. 3 Loved especially how you just ended the scene *there*, leaving the rest (ie, Arisa's response) to our own interpretation. In my opinion, going into cheese territory probably wouldn't have suited the mood of this fic. Again, my opinion so nice twist with that. ()b

This was an amazing read from start to finish. Good luck with your next work! -
Major Mike Powell III chapter 5 . 10/4/2008
Well, well, soldier...

This was N-I-ce.

Good ending to a good fic.

ONLY bad thing: it coulda been just a BIT more fluffy. Oh, FLUFF...The thing I can't get enough of. LOL

Anyway. Good work, son. I'm glad to have seen this fic through to the end.

'Til next time.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
YuriSuki chapter 5 . 10/4/2008
Very happy with the story. It was very good and I loved the pair you picked. Hope you'll write more!
ToumaSan chapter 5 . 10/4/2008
Ah...What a nice story. Thanks for another great read! Please continue writing more Arisa/Suzuka stories?
handlewithcare chapter 5 . 10/4/2008
con2020tran chapter 4 . 9/25/2008
In before Chapter 5! ...Wait. That's not good, is it?

Suzuka accepts her feelings easily, and it's even better that she has such a wonderful and understanding senpai. Who knows what would've happened if she didn't go on and on like that? Definitely a good thing, so please don't read that with sarcasm. xD

Reika and Takumi are an amazing combo. Arisa getting flustered like that was the best. Awfully cute too~ x3 And if it helps her realize her true feelings, all the better.

Can't wait for the next chapter~ -
Digikaren chapter 4 . 9/19/2008
Yay~~ I came back from vacations and I found two new chapters :D Cookies for you. I really like how this fic is going. Is super cute~~

I hope we can see Arisa and Suzuka saying something to each other in the next chaper. If not, like Reika said, let's lock them in a storage closet. Love this girl ideas, seriously XD

Good job and keep writing~~
Major Mike Powell III chapter 4 . 9/12/2008
Well, well, soldier...

This was just AW3SOME!

Suzuka's made up her mind. About time.

And Arisa gets mentally hammered. LOL That was priceless. Nice work.

As for your OC's, I think I like'em. They're pretty cool. Reika, of course, is my favorite.

Anyway. Helluva job, son. I'm lovin' this thing.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
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