I cannot believe I'm followed this story...for over 10years! I still remember readings this story for the first time like it was months ago, not years. Remains one of my all time fav FFs, even unfinished. I hope you are well and things are good in your life.

I rediscovered this after YEARS and I just still love it so much! I know the likelihood of this getting completely is minimal, but please come back if you can!

Wow, it's been a while since I had this much fun reading something. Thank you. This story was wonderful, even if it was not complete, I enjoyed all the chapters. I'll definitely miss your character Lynne. She was the highlight of the story. I hope you are well and working hard on your dreams. All the best.

Why is it always the amazing fanfics that are incomplete!? Granted, I knew it was incomplete when reading chapter 3, but I was so in love with everything by that point that I couldn't stop reading, and just had to prepare for the heartbreak. But now I'm just about to start chapter 29 and it's so sad. I wish, dear author, you'd kept on writing. (I wonder if you still see reviews probably not. But wow, 9 years since an update. Wonder how your life is now. Hope it's great x)
Anyway, thank you for such a wonderful story. Guess I'll have to finish it now

Loved this story so much! I know it's been years since you last updated, but thought I'd send a review anyways.

Authors these days just don't know how to write slowburn anymore. The two are an unlikely pair- artist archivist and billionaire playboy vigilante, but you make it work. Not only does it work, it thrives, beautifully, and the two become so closely attached it's impossible imagining them separated, or a time before they had each other. I especially appreciate Lyn's character- how beautifully unique! She's a bundle of contradictions, just like Bruce, and it works wonderfully. I also liked watching your growth as a writer over those four years. You had a great grasp of grammar, syntax, and description from the beginning, but as time passed, your character and processing grew more complex.

Loved the bits of humor woven through, particularly the modern art scene with Bruce and Lyn in the restaurant- my sides still hurt:D Also, thank you for not only not cursing every other sentence (as my generation's authors are prone to do), but also not cursing at all throughout the story. Thank you for proving it CAN be done, lol:)

I will hold onto the slim but flickering hope that perhaps one day you will remember this story, and return to it. Until then, I will be waiting, with bated breath, to learn how this story continues.

Thank you for sharing your writing!

Can you please update

That poison was inhaled. Why did the charcoal work?

This is amazing. I love you :')
I can read this fanfic several times and still be excited every chapter. I'll wait for a new chapter for the rest of my life. Thank you.

I have hopes you will update one day, so I set a follow alert, even though it’s been 8 years.

I started this story knowing it was incomplete and most likely abandoned but I enjoyed reading it anyway! Hope life is going well for you. Cheers!

Now Christmas is approaching I decided to reread some of my alltime favourite fics, It's been years since I'd read this from the beginning and what can I say, it's as wonderful a read as I remembered! :)

Thanks so much for sharing this, I can't wait to once again enjoy Lyn/Bruce's adventure!

Wishing you all the best

Update please

Well hello broken heart, I didn't need you anwyays.

Hello! I reread this after a friend moved to the Pitts recently (and I had felafel for dinner) and I remembered talking to you about Sargent and CMU a long long time ago. I am elated to find that there has been several updates since I've last read this and I am really invested in it, still. Enough to binge til 3am on a weekday night. I am still in love with your style and wit in writing. I know it would be rather ridiculous to ask for an update, so I won't. Just do know that I really enjoy your work and I hope that you have a good day every day.

Okay, this isn’t fair. Someone recced this fic on another fan fiction’s review and I just read this whole fic in a couple of days and I need to know what happens. Please come back and finish this fic. Please!

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