Reviews for Cowboys & Indians |
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bonniebeast chapter 11 . 11/24/2013 This story is absolutely perfect. |
theclassyfangirl01 chapter 4 . 1/26/2013 This is very interesting and different then the normal plot. I personally love how you have started it off and the use of books and "searching" as the start of their relationship is refreshing in a plot point of view when compared to other stories. I am excited to see where this go. |
k1942 chapter 11 . 1/25/2013 Not quite as much as what happened to Jasper, but I choked up a little when he found the garves of his human family. That was such a nice thing for Leah to do for him. I really like the relationship that has grown between the cowboy and the Indian. Great story,too! |
k1942 chapter 10 . 1/25/2013 They are growing closer and more comfortable with each other by the day. Funny how it seems so natural to me, to be reading about two vampires and two werewolves driving cross country. |
k1942 chapter 9 . 1/25/2013 I really like the way they are with each other, and it seems to be growing and getting better. This journey to Texas has been sort of like a quest, in a way. |
k1942 chapter 8 . 1/25/2013 I'm just an old woman with a bent sense of humor, but that was a lot of fun! From the sound of it, all four of them enjoyed it, too! |
k1942 chapter 7 . 1/25/2013 Seth nearly gave away their destination, but Leah caught him in time. The music was a lot of fun, as I like everything except rap and hip hop. You should hear what my dear husband calls it! |
k1942 chapter 6 . 1/25/2013 That was an amazing description of riding out the storm. Never been around a tornado and never want to be. That is scary damn stuff! With Edward shielding Seth and Jasper doing the same for Leah, now I see why it had to be the four of them. |
k1942 chapter 5 . 1/25/2013 A '67 fastback, neat car, and perfect for keeping Rosalie busy and happy. Alice is happy to have Edward out of her hair and who knows where this powwow is? |
k1942 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013 Just knowing and hanging out with Jasper is an education in itself! The need to know and to find out and to understand are truly what education is . I see friendship between these two, someday. |
k1942 chapter 3 . 1/25/2013 Esme is smarter than a few people give her credit for being. She listens, with her ears and her heart. I think the best people do. |
k1942 chapter 2 . 1/25/2013 Leah' reading list is supposed to drive Jasper away, I think, but being Jasper, it only seems to intrigue him. Or maybe he's stubborn, sticking with the books because she's so positive he won't. Interesting dynamicbetween a nineteen year old shape shifter and a vampire nearly two hundred. |
k1942 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 Okay, I'm interested! Why are Seth, Leah, Edward and Jasper driving across country, together? |
lovepath chapter 11 . 1/18/2013 The wonderful thing about the written word, compared to movies, is that it is perennially fresh for the next reader. Thank you so much, I'm glad I finally found you! I am a big JxA fan - I am a beta for Openhome's Rogue - and this is a beautiful JxL piece without violating canon. On to Star Quilt! |
Mell C chapter 11 . 7/26/2012 Lovely story- thought provoking, touching, and very moving. I like the non-linear format here. (Not sure if I have read enough of it to recall if I liked in previous uses elsewhere.) But non-linear would be a great format for stories where things you learn _later_ heavily color the way you could/should see previous events. I often have to re-read a story or book once I have finished, in order to see things from the perspective of an all-knowing author and/or characters, when the readers are clued in late in the story about important things. So- thanks for sharing with us! I know you don't actively write or check here, but I still wanted to leave my appreciation. |